Reviews for Of Gods and Women Part Two

Reviews For: Of Gods and Women Part Two

Agent-G 2005-06-26 ch 13,	abuseI checked out that part but yeah it's still a bit light. But what about that whole hunt thing they were they're for? I mean you just dropped that plot without so much as a word (literally) and where did Joxer come from? I know this was your first fic and I really hope the others don't have so many plot holes that I've seen in this but at times it's like your just rushing the story. What was all that about? I mean I knew he would take it but any of that makes no sense to me. I mean the whole glow thing reminded me too much of DBZ and I don't see why he changed like that after taking it since no one else never had that effect. Instead of grabbing me I'm kind of losing interests in this fic to be honest.
Agent-G 2005-06-26 ch 12,	abuseThat whole 'why he passed that up' in the last review was a joke I wasn't serious. Very nice visuals for Diana I was expecting someone that lookedl ike Wonder Woman LOL, but I liked how you described her. man what is it with this guy? So far two very nice looking godesses like him already. Too bad he gets nowhere more then just a kiss.
Agent-G 2005-06-24 ch 11,	abuseHe gave up a change to go into a hot bath with those two? Is he gay or something? But I hope you don't mind that I skipped the boring parts in this (unforuntately that was most of it) I mean what's the point of him saying things when no one hears him most of the time? Plus reading the same old diolague is boring when it's practically the same. When I have to do this types of chapters I usualyl only have a few of the key parts the same and everything else it different, this is the opposite. Next time try swtiching it around that will make it more entertaining. Plus if we wanted to read about the chapters we could have found a book or a sight with all this written down on. I'm personally glad that your getting away from that. Plus I don't think Diana was in the show but then again there were a few of those gods that didn't show up at all I think.
Agent-G 2005-06-23 ch 10,	abuseAnother problem with these episodes bassed chatpers are that you got a good idea of what's going to happen. I may not remember much but I do remember that she somehow get's the giant to fight that other guy. Plus you don't have to put a disclaimor on every chapter I think one is just enough. plus it's got to be a tad boring doing that every chapter.
Agent-G 2005-06-22 ch 9,	abuseWell that was much nicer, the other chapters take only a few minutes to read and it's hard to get into a story like that, this helps to keep a person in it. The twist with him keeping some of that stuff at the end was nice and I have to wonder where he'll use it. So now more of it is revealed. I can't help but think of Steven King's The Dark Tower when reading about Earth Prime cause there was a KEY world in those novels too. Did you ever read that?
Agent-G 2005-06-21 ch 8,	abuseI keep trying to find enough to say in these reviews to make them seem like they're not a waste of time but you're chatpers are so short and go so fast through the plot it's hard to do that. Maybe you should just stick a fe chatpers together I mean this whole arc would have been a decent sized chapter.
Agent-G 2005-06-18 ch 7,	abuseTrust me it was a mistake not only was that chapter short it was boring as hell and pretty much pointless and now I'm not sure I want to go on after a chapter like that. although I can't help but hope you get back to the plot before all this TV show stuff I can't wait to get past all this stuff and back to how this story was told before it. Honestly you don't really do it justice when you do cause you tend to write it at times like everyone has seen the episodes. Plus it's kind of boring for me to read the same thing happening all over again if you are I hope at least you made a few new twists to it try and make it more fresh.
Agent-G 2005-06-15 ch 6,	abuseYou haven't seen the movies that made Bruce Campbell a cult favorite or launched Sam Rami's career? Well go out now and rent the Evil dead movies or at the very least rent Army of Darkness trust me you'll love that one. You can really see where both teh actor and director get the action and humor that you see in Xena and other stuff they've done. But this chapter was kind of bad, I mean you skipped ahead so much and left out so much that the only reason I knew things like how Xena was alive again was from seeing the episode I know remaking episode based chapters suck and is tiresome but if someone read this and wasn't familiar with the show then they wouldn't know what was going on. Personally I would have waited to get more of this done before posting it I mean you can do MUCH better then this chapter. Honestly this looked like a laxy half-assed work.
Agent-G 2005-06-14 ch 5,	abuseReally? That's happened with Gaby? That's got to be the ONLY episode I constantly missed, well that and when they were frozen in ice and got out of it. I liked that part with the kid, that was kind of cute lol. I do wonder when he sees the king of thieves he takes a moment and stares at him and asks, "Does the name Ash mean anything to you? Cause it's been bugging me all day why I keep thinking that when I see you." Although I felt he could have jumped in the conversation a bit there I mean there's no need to do it exactly like how it happen in the show.
Agent-G 2005-06-07 ch 4,	abuseYou know I never understood why she was this Amazone princess or something I think I missed out on a certain episode cause I never got that or how she got that title. Yeah I think I pretty much know how this plays out if it's like the TV show.
Agent-G 2005-05-25 ch 3,	abuseYeah she died a couple of times in that show didn't she? like three or four kind of lost count, man now that I think of it she's died and come back so many times she rivals Jean Gray LOL. Couldn't surprise me if she came back though, just depends on how. Well I hope others pick this up.
Agent-G 2005-05-02 ch 2,	abusecool chapter liked the fight scene in there nicely done. I have no idea either, as for reviewers you could always look up the e-mail addresses to those that reviewed before and ask them to give the other ones like this a chance. Just an idea. Anyways looking forward to what happens next.
Agent-G 2005-04-27 ch 1,	abuseWell I'm sure if you put in a mention in the other stories that you're starting with the begining it will pick up (I hope) Although if her tongue felt like that then I think if she did 'bed' him like he said then he might not survive...but then what a way to go LOL. Keep up the good work.

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