your good now finnish it

i think its usally sweet

AWESOME .. really nice Taikari .. so sensitive and soft and fluffy .. PLEASE post that last chapter man

hey i agree with you that this could be a little hard to read but i also find it very romantic. it's very touching how they came togther and are still loving each other despite what could go wrong. please don't take the story off the net. its one of the few taikari's that flow smoothly and clearly. true their are some good ones (that don't contain sexual relations) that are really good. so keep up the good work i'm rooting for you guy or girl whichever

really good story so far.

Please update.
I've read some pretty awsome Taikari, but this one is without a dought the best ever!
please update, It was just getting so exiting

well, just read all 28 and great but to bad there isn't more stuff like in chapter 8.
i wonder what will happen in the storyline will go next,
i'm not really sure how the dad & mom will take it because the show takes place in japan and in japan incest is generally considered immoral but incest is not illegal in japan, but they still can't get married in japan.

well form what i read in chapter 28 the dad is infuriated but i can't be sure of the reason yet , it could be because taichi & hikari have been keeping it secret form him and his wife or that he thinks that taichi & hikari are having sex or that taichi forced hikari because of the small age difference or something or it could be that he is just not open minded and thinks it's immoral, have no idea what the mom going think about it.
not sure why but i'm guessing your going to go with immoral for the reason.

not really sure if this story is dead or not but you last update in 2006 and it's 2009 now, so you forgot about this story or chapter 29 is super long after 3 years in the making chapter.

Zomg, 2 years man, this is like the litany of blood ( Harry Potter ) just don't die or anything.

This is a great story and one that has made my arrival into Digi-mon fandom more enjoyable.

update NOW!

IT'S ONE CHAPTER MAN. ONE CHAPTER.

YOU CAME THIS FAR. CAN'T YOU GET OFF YOUR ** AND WRITE ONE MORE CHAPTER? WHAT HAPPENS??

You can't stop there!! This fic is so good, one of the best I've seen of the pairing!! Plz u have to write more

it's been about 2 years since you last updated...just give us the ending, will ya?

This story is incredible well written. Your greatest talent is your ability to write descriptions, many times I felt like I was actually watching something instead of just reading. I just hope you haven't given up this fic because it would be a tragedy to see such a story die so close to the end. Please don't give it up becasue I'll be looking forward to reading it.

...very...emotional...