 The Odd Little Turtle 6/22/08 . chapter 1this starts out sad, but is actually very cute
enjoyed this |
 StormHeart 6/24/03 . chapter 1Cute and sweet. I loved it. |
 Endemic 5/25/03 . chapter 1-This is going to my favorites
This piece captures Colossus' character so adequately. It's touching without being too obtrusive or mushy. Especially, I enjoyed Logan's appearance - as inconspicuous as possible ;) but being probably the most sensitive knucklehead on Earth. You captured Logan's life nicely into that paragraph and the end with Petey's "tovarish"-statement was a worthy ending.
I love it |
 Rhys 3/25/02 . chapter 1Pretty good. I like your other two like this (Mags and Rahne) a littl better, but I like the way Piotr comes to peace with himself and with Yana. When is this, though? Just wondering, 'cause Kitty seems awfully young. Oh well, I do like it. Logan was done great, by the way! |
 Pip's Sister 1/25/02 . chapter 1Nice work. I really enjoyed it. Even though I really haven't read anything with Illyana the first couple of paragraphs nearly made me cry. Great work, Phil. |
 LiFeIzPrEtEnD 3/28/01 . chapter 1awww! it was really good. i liked it alot |
 Cara 3/25/01 . chapter 1 That was nice. |
 Houkanno Yuuhou 3/24/01 . chapter 1Wow. This is good, really good. The only thing I could ask for is more to this story (it is no surprise how much I love Kitty and Piotr :P)! I will beg if I have to! Anyway, this was done beautifully, and even though you said not to cry, I still did. ;) Kat |
 TicTactful 3/24/01 . chapter 1*sniffle* ... Need I say more? |
 Stormkpr 3/24/01 . chapter 1Very touching. You did a good job of writing Wolverine. |