I guess this was a decent story. It kind of meandered about, and was much shorter then I am used to reading, but over all it was an entertaining read. Good Job.

Aw, it's over. But! It's a very good story, you kept the characters in character and the storyline believable. I liked how River "merged" with inanimate objects, it seems like something she'd do.
Thanks for a great story!

k well i'm surprised i found a story i hadn't read. this kinda didn't end right since they actually didn't get together, but it was fun no the less.

that was really good

I almost choked when she told Simon she'd done a lot of kissing. I can just see Jayne ducking for cover. Priceless. Yeah, the ending was ambiguous and I really wanted to see some sort of conclusive scene where they got together, but this is good too. It leaves it open for further imagination. Besides, I totally know what you mean about lack of inspiration and motivation. One of my most beloved fics is on semi-permanent hiatus because I lost those two things and cant' get them back. At least you finished, which I think everyone can respect. Anyway, I really liked it and the way you wrote River, especially during the scene where she "was" the house. Very descriptive. Very beautiful. Thanks. O:)

I liked it. Continue with more Jayne/River. I'm fond of this pairings. Also, will you pleasepleaseplease do a fic where Jayne seems to be the only one who understands her "crazy rumblings."?

Chapter 7 has to be the most poetic chapter of this really wonderful story. Thank you!

I'm in the middle of reading it. I like where this is going. Full review later!

well done! i thought this fic was original and beautiful. you do river very well :)

will there ever be a sequal?

But I don't want it to be done.

*cries*

It was lovely though.

I like that she's not done yet with him.

*sigh* it's over...

I loved River in this chapter, and I laughed when Simon went "Mleargh" and "Blergh"... hehehe...

gorgeous fic... does it ever get a sequel? *winks*

really good story i cant wait to read more

I like that he thinks that Simon's crazier...

I always loved how River hangs upside down or in some other weird position all the time. Great story.

Aww...that can't be the end! But I know what you mean about motivation and such.

It was a great fic. Loved it. Just wish there would be more to follow up on the "I'm not finished with you, Jayne Cobb." Great job with River's characterization. Not many people get it right.

Jazzy