:) I like it. Especially the Shakespearean language used.

I love this story so much that it hurts.

Really, its so beautiful, that my heart hammers loudly, and I get a strange feeling in my stomach *sigh*

Oh, how I adore it!

<3

HQJ

"The letters in the dust rested silently, looking almost smug, as though they had known it all along."

God, that's beautiful. D;

i don't know why but i found myself reading this aloud to myself, your writing is beautiful. it's so in character it felt like i was reading one of shakespeare's own.
great story :)

I know you're off the fanon, but I was just in a production of Romeo and Juliet, and, well, this made me insanely happy. It was gentle and sweet and real. What I found most impressive was how well you mimicked Shakespearean language. Well done.

I love this! It is absolutely beautiful - written with great skill! You have really got inside the character's heads. In your hands the situation seems entirely plausible. It is also the first fanfic I ever read, and the one that convinced me to carry on reading. Well done!

aww this was so beautiful and sweet. I loved it >w<

you did a wonderful job on writing it 'w'

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sorry, Im not usually one for obnoxious emotes, but this story demands it TwT so...awesome ;-;
Mercutio x Benvolio is so awesome and you handled it beautifully! Their responses were within their characters which for some reason seems hard t odo in the shakespeare slash fandom =/ or maybe I just read way too many bad HamletHoratio. Yeah.
Anyways, digression!
Awesome work!

AW. Thank you for writing that. :D

adorable.

Absolutely beautiful. Especially loved the authenticity of the dialouge

So pretty. :)

It is lovely :)

This is excellent! Really sweet :)) Love it.

Love this pairing! I hope you write more. I'm actually convinced that there is some serious Mercutio/Benvolio subtext in Romeo and Juliet. This could easily happen. Sweet story :D