Reviews for A Breath of Fresh Air

Reviews For: A Breath of Fresh Air

TheHamsterInMyMind 2007-02-06 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful, you captured the characters really well... I'm guessing that even Daisuke has a rougher grumpier side. : )
vampirelf 2006-03-31 ch 1,	abuseHaha, grumpy Dai arguing with Dark was very amusing. I especially like your description of Satoshi from Daisuke's perspective - "If it were Satoshi, if he was the angel of death, I would go with him." Love that line. I think it's great insight into how Daisuke would feel about Satoshi on a random day.
Scatter Plot 2005-06-21 ch 1,	abuseFound myself craving more of your work after reading "Found Myself Loving You" lol. Yea not very funny but oh well. This won't be very detailed do to my shortage of time. I love this story. Nice little look into Daisuke's feelings. I
Lady Gaidin 2005-05-21 ch 1,	abuseThat was GREAT! You made me crack up laughing and people were looking at me strangly because of it, but that was SO worth it! Keep up the good work and PLEASE, write more! Lady Gaidin ps: They should kiss, lol ^_*
SKSuncloud 2005-05-20 ch 1,	abuseOMG! Tell me that this isn't a one-shot! You could add so much more and make me squee like a little fangirl SO much more! ^.^ I loved all your thoughts between Dark and Daisuke. Those rocked my known world. Especially when Dark said: -Dude, I didn't know you swung that way.- ^.^ OMG! That was awesome! My favorite line was: (If it were Satoshi, if he was the angel of death, I would go with him.) Beautiful. Really. You must add more though! Don't keep me in the dark! XD (irony...)
Chokuro 2005-04-30 ch 1,	abuseHAH Ever soo cool
fireysoul 2005-04-25 ch 1, anon.	abusethe first chapter seems okay. it makes me wonder what the rest of the story would be about. =)
kaitoh-chan 2005-04-24 ch 1,	abuseAh, usually I dislike yaoi fics, but I must make an exception! Personally, I wouldn't really think Daisuke would actually paint Satoshi, but other than that, there was nothing OOC about it. I especially liked the Daisuke-Dark conversations.
schizo and proud 2005-04-24 ch 1, anon.	abusethat was great. hope to see some more writing from you. Cheers!
Shimmering Solitude 2005-04-24 ch 1,	abusehey...continue it...don't keep it a one-shot...please? puppy dog eyes It's a good beginning but it needs a little more...so please?

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