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Okay...

What?

What the heck happened there?

Uhm. I'm still trying to figure out the convoluted plot. Don't get me wrong, it was a really great fic, but...uh...the story is very, very wierd.

That was realy great!

Aww that was realy good. I can't wait to read what happens next:)!

Wow was not expaeting that at all.

Very good keep it up.

Yeah, I know this is really late, but pretty good story. And, um, just a thought. If Grissom's mother in the past named Olivia, how's Lily named after her?

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! That is the BEST fic I've ever read! Seriously! Someone should make this into an episode or a film! YEAH THAT'S IT! If Sara and Grissom ever leave they should make this into a film! It's times like these I wish I was a film producer! Send it to one! It's really good! Did I mention that?

Hey there! I just read your story and I loved it. I don't get to read too many CSI fanfics like that; I think that was just my second supernatural. Anyway, it was great, and very addictive. I had to read the whole thing at once. Well done!

hhmm. I like how you ended it. A little mad that you made everyone wait so long, yes, but I do like the ending. It makes a full circle. But still leaves you wondering exactly how it ends up. I'm not going to ask for a sequel cause you said that the story was dying for you and I know what thats like. but good luck in other storys.

i thought it wouldn't turn out good but it turned otu ok i guess

the ending was good, but not great, though I do understand that the story was dying for you, and I've been there before so it makes sense to me.

I am happy with the ending...it was a really good story. Maybe a sequal with Lily? (hint hint, wink wink) lol...thanks for the good read. ~L~

true you kind of fell out in the end, but a good story overall! can't wait for more work from you! great job!

*SQUEALS* YAY! YOU UPDATED! :D Made my day, even though I've got strep throat... even though it's the middle of summer. ANYWAYS... I adored the last chapter and am sad that it's done... sequel..epilogue..something? Please? It would make me ecstatic! I've been checking this story since the first post.. wicked story.

Hey Corey!

Aw... I'm so sad this is ending here! You did have a good thing going, but hey... Gotta do what you gotta do. It was an excellent story though with an awesome plotline. I can't wait until update your other story. So, once again, loved this story... Good luck on your other story. Hope to talk to you later, haven't talked to you in ages... Got a few things going on, so anytime you feel like talking, email me... Or I'll just email you, whichever...

Peace out, one love,
Cloe