Awesome story.^_^ I just wish there were lemons...

It is clear to say that dialouge is not you're strong point. Your despcription and method of story-telling is practically flawless and well done,but the dialouge lacks delivery. However, so good so far, I look forward to reading the rest

Two of my favorite parts:
"Mom, did Grandpa have that talk about, you know, AIDS and stuff. Because, um, kid in a candy shop, and now there's absolutely no barrier…"
"I believe he did." She gave an uneasy frown. "But I'll check with Grandpa just in case."

"Do you think that Wacdnald's will suffer business reversals now that Naraku is dead?"

AMAZINGLY WRITTEN! :]
I love MirKag because I hate the way Sango is with Miroku... she thinks she owns him.
I prefer Kagome and him together.
So sweet.

I love this chap. M/K is so adorable. I love them together more than anything. They look so good together. I mean, Kagome is the reason why Miroku's in the group anyway. I wish Takahashi made them a pair. Sango had to exist. :(

"... hurling along in the same direction Kagome's box had gone."

THAT LINE WAS GENIUS! xD
Makes me love Miroku even more.
And I love this pairing.
This is so nicely written!

Oh! This was an absolutely splendid story! Absolutely wonderful! I LOVED teh twist you put in there with the possibility between Miroku's grandad and Kikyo. Wonderful writing, amazing creativity. Well done!

Congratulations,
Sable Miyako

Even though i know this will never happen in the actual series, if the circumstances where the same, i thnk this is exactly how it would have played out. In other words i think you write the exact same way the creator of inuyasha dose and therefor are as talented as him. I am not ,making this up, if you ever create a story of your own with your own charectors, and if you still have your account then, pleasepleaseplease tell me, I'd definatly read it.

haha...yay! Happy Endings rock! MirKags4eva!

You’re a good writer, and you have Miroku, Kagome, and Inuyasha’s personality down to a T. But I’m afraid your Mrs. Higurashi was EXTREMELY OOC. Not only was she berating Miroku for things she obviously didn’t understand, but the fact that her mother obviously seemed to prefer Inuyasha…INUYASHA of all people, who time and time again managed to HURT her daughter, managed to put her daughter in mortal danger without any second thoughts at all, Inuyasha, who was going to KILL her when she first met him.

What kind of mother IS she? The Higurashi-san I know from canon would be understanding..she wouldn’t jump immediately to conclusions like you have her do here. She’s a kind soul who wouldn’t sacrifice people SIMPLY for her own peace of mind, as she was so willing to do with Miroku. Her constant, “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO MY DAUGHTER” grated on my nerves to the point where I nearly stopped reading, but ultimately I’m glad that I continued, if only to see Miroku get his happy ending. The little scene where she caught them together in her room, kissing, bothered me. Not because they were kissing, but because of how disturbed her mother was. She has no qualms about letting her daughter travel through a demon infested feudal era. She did not once remember that Miroku traveled with her constantly, unsupervised by adults, and alone.

The fight with Naraku was a bit anticlimactic. And predictable. And honestly, I have some reservations about Kagome offering Inuyasha the jewel to ‘become human and stay with them’. I know she was only doing it to save face, but for me, one of Kagome’s more endearing qualities was that unlike Kikyo, she ALWAYS accepted him for who he was, she never tried to make him ‘become human’ for him to stay with her. She was happy with his full demon form.

sequel?
oh please! i rea;;y loved this story so much

Aw, I really, really loved this story. And the ending was just a perfect conclusion to the entire thing -- lighthearted and hopeful. Just like the believable relationship you constructed between Miroku and Kagome. You even made their good-bye with Inuyasha okay with me. This is also the very first fic I've read where the past Miroku comes to the future -- not as a reincarnation or anything else like that. And I really loved it.
The explanation you gave with his Grandfather for the romance with Kagome was one of my favorite things in the whole story. You really went into a lot of detail so no one could argue on the 'un likeliness' of the two getting together.

This was a very well thought-out, heart-wrenching and tender story. Great, great job. And wonderful writing. I also enjoyed the little dig at McDonalds -- or Wacdnalds. Very funny.

-Rory4

I loved how you ended your story, especially that last line! Your story left me relieved, happy, relaxed, and laughing. It was the feeling of joy after a good hard cry, knowing that everything will now be better and happiness is now in sight. Thank you, this was wonderfully done.

the ending was so cute and very funny - especially the last line. loved it!

this chapter was so poignant - a real tear jerker