|Reviews for So it shall be in the end|
| Muzzlehatch 5/12/11 . chapter 6
From another "old guy", I was tearing up too.
| Yamal 10/18/10 . chapter 6
Àbsolutely sad but beautiful story. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work! _
| John Doe 8/7/08 . chapter 2
God Dammit man you made me cry, and thats no easy deal
| Mike 3/13/08 . chapter 6
Simply beautiful! This is the first time I've ever been moved to tears by a piece of work!
| spectre666 2/11/08 . chapter 1
Had to say it again. This is a masterpiece. Chokes me up every time I read it.
| spectre666 12/9/07 . chapter 6
I don't know why I've never reviewed this, possibly because it move me too much. A magnificent end to a legendary pair. One of the few tales that brings fresh tears to my eyes each time I read it.
With sincere thanks,
| BlueEyedBrigadier 11/25/07 . chapter 6
If Disney decided to show the final moments of their tenacious teen twosome...they would be denying fans superior quality by using anything but your work here, Duck. This was heart-wrenching but oh so beautiful work...and I think the reader is better for it;D
| Juan Zapponatime 11/6/07 . chapter 1
Wow! I have not cried this much since Captainkodak1's "Farewell Team Possible" I am still crying as I think about it. It was a sad,yet beautiful work.
| PegasusJF 7/29/07 . chapter 6
I...honestly don't know what to say.
I think I'll go read your happier stories...
| Samurai Crunchbird 7/28/07 . chapter 6
Man, the tears started and lasted a good 5-10 minutes!
I am usually one to write more than just the usual "sunshine and praise" reviews. Forgive me, but I have to say something here about this piece...
The your illustrative descriptions of Team Possible's injuries and long-lasting effects was heart-wrenching and thorough. The ending scene...“Kim Possible, Ron Stoppable. Inseparable!”
This was great writing from beginning to end-except for one small detail. I am almost afraid to even mention it were it not for my promise to "write more than just the usual 'sunshine and praise' reviews."
It was the summary itself...it said it took place sixty years after "As it was in the Beginning". this would put the two of them at 77 years of age. Your stories added another decade to that. I am sorry, but I am probably not the first to do the math and get confused before letting go of that and just letting the story flow-although I am probably the first to point it out in a review! It sort of distracted me for about half of the first chapter.
I have a friendly suggestion, writer-to-writer. Perhaps the summary should be changed to:
"Sequel to As it was in the Beginning. It's their sixtieth wedding anniversary, and they are now at the end of their lives".
Thank you once again for such a thrilling and masterfully written story
Your friend in writing,
The Samurai Crunchbird
| Sailor GaOn Donut 6/5/07 . chapter 6
| CastaS 9/8/06 . chapter 6
not excactly my liking of genre, but great.
| RngrThorne 5/5/06 . chapter 6
Beautiful. I love the way you showed Ron's injuries from his point of view then Kim's. You captured strong love's feeling better than I've seen in a long time.
| conan98002 4/10/06 . chapter 6
she loved him enough to fight to live even though it was agony and he loved her enough to die with her so that they could both have peace sad but beautifu.I actually cried at the end of this very poignant story its definitely going in my favorites.
| CajunBear73 1/15/06 . chapter 6
Beautiful work, Wise. Thank you for this one. CB73