i love your story so far but i would like to point out that HOTOHORI was hotohori's celestial name precisely because he was the warrior under the hotohori constellation, it was not a name that he used as the emperor. rather, he used the name saihitei during his four years in the throne, thus, if your hotohori should inherit a name from him, it should be either saihitei (his royal name) or seishuku (his given name). also, boushin used the name, i think, reizaitei (or something close to that) during his reign...sorta like modern day royalties from england and stuff...they get to have plenty of names. thus, hotohori is a bit inappropriate for his great grandson if he is not the celestial warrior under the Hotohori constellation.

i didn't mean for this to be accusatory or anything. gomen ne.

Man! even more suspense! I really must re-read the entire thing in one fell swoop. Hey,then I can start a fanclub for Nemesis...yes I can see it now, I'd start with my favorite couples. Hotohori and Keeah, Faraco and Lee, Chulivey and Suraco. I think some of these new characters may be seishi of the other two gods. Can't wait till the sequel. Hope it ties up some of these loose ends...

Wow. I wasn't expecting this. I'm sorry it took me a while to get this review in. I actually caught wind of this [very exciting!] new chapter a few days ago but I just haven't gotten around to reading it.

At first I was a bit confused, and I skipped to the end and read your end notes and that helped, so now I can actually write something.

First off, I really liked this chapter. You created this mood of mystery and suspense and it was excellent. However, I'm also very sad. It's over! [Well, not really, seeing as I'll be heavily anticipating the sequel!] But still, it's been a pleasure to be here for part of the ride.

Really, I must thank you a gazillion times more than you thank me, because really, you are very deserving of all the praise I can give you [and you deserve a lot more] and I'm very thankful and honored to have found and enjoyed this story.

But now that Nemesis is ending, I must say that it was amazing. I loved every part of it. From the day I read 50+ chapters because it was amazing, and like a brilliant novel; to today, where it continues to be just as captivating.

Now, I'll just happily anticipate this new sequel, and I hope you keep a lot of the qualities of the first one. Your teaser was interesting. Are you contemplating perhaps some first-person writing? That would be very interesting. I think that it would really suit your clear, justified emotional and detailed writing.

But I really like your words, no matter how you write them, and I wish you the best of luck.

I will be rereading the entire story in the near future [outside of my overwhelming school time] and then I can perhaps give a better summary of everything that I've been thinking about.

I thank you so much for all of your replies, your attentiveness to my rambling [such as now] and really, your amazing story.

Happy Writing!

I'll see you in the sequel! =)

-WALLFLOWER

PS I'm rambling, and this is really unclear, but, hopefully you'll get the message that I love this work, and I can't wait for the sequel!

Oh boy, had been waiting for the new chappy. I read it on vacation, thanks for keeping it up! it just gets better and better, though I get a little confused with all the new characters, and the many mysteries. Maybe a bit of a recap would be in order? Even so, well worth the wait! Please update as soon as possible.

YES! I was so happy when you updated! It feels like meeting a good friend all over again. Once again, I must commend you on an excellent chapter. And thanks for your thanks, but really, it was all your hard and word and dedication to this chapter.

It was very, very, interesting, and I couldn't stop reading! I especially liked that part where Suraco awoke! And things seem to be getting very, very interesting.

And no worries about getting in late, I can entirely understand! And since your chapters are so wonderfully long, entertaining and well-written, it's entirely worth it!

I'm already looking forward to the next chapter, and I really am still in shock at how good this story continues to be. It's really [and I've said this before, but I'm just making a point! :)] an epic.

So, see you next time. Your very loyal and happy reader,

-Wallflower

Hi,

It's been a long time since your last update, and I hope that you're not thinking of dropping this fic! I've been periodically checking up on this story in hopes of an update, because I truthfully think that it is one very good fic.

You're a very talented writer, and this is just a marvelous story. I hope you're not thinking of just ending it here. If you are, that is completely your own decision, and I'm glad that I could've been part of the run.

However, I still hold out hope [*crosses fingers*] that you'll update this great story. :) It's one of the best stories on and I'm completely, absolutely hooked...still.

Best of luck in whatever you choose. Your loyal reader,

WALLFLOWER

I enjoyed this chapter. The humorous [at least to me] tension between Lee/Faraco/Hotohori was enjoyable as well as that little story which sparked that flurry of discussion that revealed different aspects to each characters' personality.

However, I greatly appreciated the bits of Chulivey in this chapter, I really enjoy her, and that little teaser about 'Aoki' was interesting.

Great job on another chapter, and update soon!

-Wallflower

PS That Princess and the Star story sound incredibly familiar, as I was probably told that story when I was younger as well. It's nice to be reminded of that story.

Hmm...an interesting chapter. Still, I am most undecided on the whole Hotohori/Lee/Faraco triangle. I wouldn't really mind which of the two she chooses [for now].

This chapter was very descriptive and had a good sense of light humor. However, there were only a few spelling/grammar mistakes which I caught:

“Now that, that's settled, let us proceed to breakfast. I am rather hungry.” The comma between the two 'thats' is unnecessary.

With a sigh she moved away going to stand beside a window. The 'going' is unnecessary.

Both very minor mistakes in a very well written and edited chapter. The suspense grows with each word! I can't wait for the next chapter!

-Wallflower

PS I just noticed that this entire story is incredibly long [not a bad thing], and I congratulate you on your diligence on continuing with it and expanding it. It has become an epic.

Another very well developed chapter! XD

I really like all the sexual tensions. If I'm reading your hints correctly it seems something may bloom between Keeah and Hotohori. Oh that would be delicious!
Anyway, another good chappy. Some interesting bad guys too...the plot thickens...

I like both of them--Faraco and Hotohori. I think this is going a lot towards Faraco's favour, the first kiss and all...but for some reason, i wish Hotohori would win. I just wish...

Btw, I've become a great fan of your Ryotoshiki character. I've been thinking a lot about him lately. His chi's red. I don wanna sound lunatic or anything, but are you planning him as a Suzaku seishi, or something?...Or maybe I'm just being nuts. Yeah, i am. Okay, bye!

Hooray! Another great chapter [as usual]
It was really clear and easy to read. I also liked Sotisku's journal entries and I can't help but laugh everytime I watch Lee and her inner voice battle it out.
Also, I appreciated the humor. The tension between Hotohori and Faraco was fun to read ['sour grapes' really got me.] Also, the 'Hotohori and his merry men comment' that Saori made [or Mioko] really cracked me up. It was great to see such an interesting mix of genres this chapter, and great character development, esp. with Sotisku.
So, once again, great job [I say that a lot to you don't I? Well, you deserve it!]and Update Soon!

-Wallflower

PS The only thing that bothered me about this chapter was the lack of Chulivey. She is so original and has an unique story that I hope will be continued. Even so, please continue with your great in-depth writings about the other characters. [I know, I ask so much! :) ]

Aw, Shadow's so cute! Evil, meniacing, and dead, but cute. He talks in the way babies talk, with less innocent words. Anyway, when are you going to add more Chulivey and Liang scenes? I want to see those, please!

UPDATE(with LiangXChulivey scene)SOON!

Whew! Another great chapter. I'm sorry I didn't get to read it earlier!

I also came across the review reply for me you left on your author page. Thanks for listening, although I might have worded something incorrectly. I LOVE your action series. They actually keep me on the edge of my seat, and it's lovely to read something that is so exciting!

However, you don't always have to listen to my rambling. You're doing a great job with this story and I look forward to your next chapter! Update soon!

-Wallflower

oh boy, I'm having a hard time keeping up with all the characters, old and new. What suspense! whatever happened to Seryu anyway?looking forward to the next chappy as always...