slightly out of character. elizabeth wouldnt have killed aiden in any way.nor could she drink. :)
briing sheppard back. :(
dont let lizbeth do anything stupid.. with jack. that would be wrong. btw, this is angst/romance, not drama:D
please update soon:D

Wow this story is brilliant!! Please please please ud asap! I need to know what happens next!

THAT'S REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD!

I LOVE Jack/Liz. That truly is my favorite pairing. and the McKay/Teyla thing is awesome too.

Ooh, cool. Another chapter! Jack was quite persistent in this and even though I love the guy I was secretly hoping he wouldn’t make a move on Elizabeth. :) LOL! at Cameron. I love his character and Ben Browder’s great. Hmm, stuff’s happening between Rodney and Teyla.

Hi, just wanted to say that I really liked this chapter, I loved how you wrote the jakc/liz friendship and the teyla/rodney stuff is interesting, never really looked at that but you wrote a nice scene for them and want to see more from you soon, keep up with the nice writing.

That's so nice of Jack to be friendly. John did ask him to take care of her right? Or was it Jack who asked John to take care of here? ^ ^;

Well, serves Sam right. It's *her* fault for waiting and wanting to keep it in the room. Hmph. I can't believe she was going to go evil on Liz! -scoffs-

And are you thinking of doing... a Rodney/Teyla pairing?

O_O?

Um... well, I've never thought of that! Interesting... ^ ^ And I'm happy to see Daniel! Would it be alright if you added him to the story more?

Update soon!

What?! Teyla and Rodney?! I'm surprised! And what is this with Jack being super supportive? He's not being fair to John or Sam. grr

OK...so John is telling Jack to look after her? That doesn't seem like it will have good consequences. Why won't Elizabeth tell him what's wrong? She obviously needs to get it out in the open. Does she just think she already knows what he will say? She shouldn't keep it bottled up inside. Grr..and John's going to be gone for a week. I definitely smell trouble.

“Come back to me.”

Great line. I was missing this story and so happy that it continued. This was another excellent update. Looking forward to more. I wonder what'll happen if Jack's looking after her. :)

Aw... poor Elizabeth! Is that how it actually happened? It seems strange though, since I wouldn't expect Elizabeth to shoot Ford against his will... if that's what she did that is. Hm... this thing's just as dark as it's name! ^ ^ Please update again soon.

Whoa, have to say I just got to read through all the chapters you've posted and it's really interesting. I like the things between the characters, like the Jack/Liz thing was pretty interesting, never seen a story with that before but I like it. Hard for me to say but I actually like the shweir stuff and I know you write lots of it but I like your shweir stories which is rare for me, seeing that it's not exactly my ship, anyway the story here is really cool and can't wait for more.

Haha, you know, I was half expecting Daniel to run into them. Poor Jack, man, you're really making me believe in this Jack/Liz parring it's scary!

lol, well, please update again soon!

Thanks for posting part 8! Awesome chapter :) Hurry with the next ones :)

Ok, yeah, Jack definitely needs to get over it, especially since he has Sam. He shouldn't be selfish like that. I'm really glad John and Liz are together and settled in. :)

Sorry if this review sucks but it's my frist. I like where your going with this story. I all so hope you add more soon. But I have a question how could you know about Michel and not Ronon. I probly speeled their names wrong.