 Clever Critter 2008-09-18 . chapter 9Hey!
I recently found your fic and I've really enjoyed reading every chapter. (Actually, once I got done reading it once- I went back and started over again x3.) I'd love to see a second one, even though it's been quite some time since it was updated.
I love the way you write the characters- which is important, but when it's coupled with an excellent writing style it makes it all the more interesting. I'm very glad I stumbled on this!
-Norah Reaves |
 gaap237 2007-10-23 . chapter 1It was thge best!! |
 SilverNY57 2007-08-17 . chapter 9 Loving it so far - please keep writing more in this vein! I like the sort of accidental bond you've created for Sky and Bridge. And I LOVE Sky angst! Not real interested in the Sky/Z line - never really saw those two together anyway. I would really be interested in seeing how others react to the whole incident; how does Sky take it? does it make Bridge feel like more of a "freak"? Does the bond between them help the bond between all five? Do the others feel left out?
Good story! |
 tuRtl3bOy 2006-08-09 . chapter 9yay! I finally finished this fic. -sighs happily- it was cool. I loved it so much...I almost didn't want it to end...well, good job and good luck on your other fic endeavors! ^_^ |
 mistresshawk 2006-05-15 . chapter 9 I hate stories like this. Stories that I run across accidently and that are so good, so well written, so interesting that I end up reading it, and then (worse!) have to go read everything else by that author. At 11:34PM. When I have class in ten hours. And I didn't go to sleep until 6AM last morning after a similar situation, discovering some other author. And now probably won't go to sleep until 6AM next morning ( if at all ), since I'll just stay up and read fanfiction all night.
I hate stories like this. Stories about characters that I've never really cared about ( I'll be honest-- the only reason I watch SPD is because I started watching Mystic, and read that Toby in Mystic played Piggy in SPD. I was curious. And now Tivo records it, and I'm too lazy to fix it, and too bored to just delete episodes. ) and didn't particularly pay attention to, and made them come to life and be worth thinking about. Which means I'll go off searching for more fics about Bridge dealing with his power ( it's an interesting power, and can't possibly be fun to deal with, and vaugely reminds me of Rouge in X-Men ) and paying more attention to the fact that Bridge always wears long sleeves. |
 Blue Eyed Dragon Girl 2005-12-02 . chapter 9Wow! That was an AWESOME story! I loved it! I absolutely LOVED it! It was soo well written and I loved how protective and close everyone was of eachother! Its always nice to see the softer side of the big tough stern blue ranger and interesting (like with Jack) to see the change in perspectives when the illusion is shattered! Great job! AMAZING! I LOVED it! Bridge is such a sweety! I will love him FOREVER! He's the little brother I never had! *sigh* I would LOVE to see more of your work! Cudos! |
 CrazyGirl47 2005-11-30 . chapter 9I'm fairly new to reading the PR fics around here, especially the SPD ones, but I'm so glad I stumbled onto this! It's so rare to find a good story that's, you know, JUST A STORY. Most things out there are romance, which is fine and all, but it's nice to find something that explores relationships in a different way and does it WELL, with a good grasp of character. This is the first fic I've read in a long time that was just a general tale, and it was totally refreshing. Your writing is great, your grammar and spelling superb, and I love the character building and exploring of their relationships. I wish it wasn't over, but since I fully understand that it's a tad tiresome to be badgered for a sequel, I'll just take a look at your other work. Wouldn't mind more of this same plot, though. It's totally a nifty one. |
 Ghostwriter 2005-09-23 . chapter 9Cute story. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 LadyBaisemon 2005-09-12 . chapter 9WOW. That really is an amazing story, and a wonderful ending. Um, I'd love to say more, really, but I can't stay on long. As soon as my sis comes back I gotta get offline...
But I love it and I can't wait to read a sequel or whatever you have planned.
~Drigs |
 TheDarkOne8703 2005-09-04 . chapter 9Amazing, a really great way to end it. I can't wait to read more of your stories though I am a huge fan of Sky/Syd and Jack/Z if you wrote all your stories like this one, I'll check out Z/Sky.
~TheDarkOne |
 garnetred 2005-09-04 . chapter 9I can't wait to read more of your stories. Please write soon. |
 Funky In Fishnet 2005-09-04 . chapter 9Hey star! This was fantastic, I love how the Commander was written and how he behaves with them. U ended this superb fic beautifully. Great work! Keep it up :- ) |
 Psycho Tangerine 2005-09-04 . chapter 9That was a nice little ending :) |
 cmar 2005-09-04 . chapter 9Very nicely done, and short but sweet. I really like your treatment of Cruger.
As a suggestion, this could have been combined with the last chapter since both were essentially simple 'winding-up' scenes, maybe with the addition of a short scene with Sky to conclude his part of it. |
 Lgbabyblu 2005-09-03 . chapter 9Neat! I wanna read more More MORE! LOL, I love this story :) Its awesome. |