i like it :D

You should've had him gain Kyuubi's power,knowledge,strength,skill,power,and rank in the Bijuu

lmao...omg...that was funny as hell when sin told lee he was a ten incher

from time to time i have noticed u have made several mistakes that has never been corrected.. for example when you were talkin about q class you gave out sasukes name not his brothers name. either you dont have a beta or you have one that cannot read all that well...id sudjest rechecking your work and finding mistakes in order to improve the your writing abbilites

Ah, very cool chapter
in the author's note you mentioned your getting into reading books, welcome to the club. If you liked artemis fowl books i'd recommend the CHERUB/The New Heroes/Maximum ride series. Those are a few but i don't want to list too many. If you like Lots and Lots of action try Matther Reilly books. Just remember to keep an open mind, thats the key.
Keep it up
- X3K

Some originality would be nice.

Good story.

Wonderful. Love It. Can't Wait For Next Chapter. UPDATE SOON! GAMBATTE NE!:)

update soon.

Awesome story! Keep up the good work!

Her skin… her beautiful skin was… ugly! Black… like some sticky disease was attached to her!

Lulz.


Also, chakra, not charka. It's like 50/50 with you.

Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.

I love your reading list, you might also want to try out the Percy Jackson series by Rick Riordan. The chapter titles are hilarious and a pretty good read, even if they are for young adults.

Excellent new chapter, love how Sin's encounter with Orochi-teme went.

Its a nice story.
Its exiting and even tho Naruto is kinda overpowered the plot is still nice and alot of thing make me laugh.
if i had to rate this story from 1 to 10 its would be either 9and half or 10-.
Really nice.

I like the chapter