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K1M
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
Wow! That fic was so sweet! Iruka is such a good man, giving Naruto a second chance when no one else did! I was nice to write something about Naruto's time at the beginning of the Academy, about how Iruka reacted to the news that he would be the teacher in charge of the infamous Kyuubi-boy. I think you pictured them very well, and the story was very nice. It brought a smile to my lips and a warm feeling to my heart. (^_^)
Myra A.
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
Oh. **. You made me cry! That was so beautiful. There's just no other words for it. It's so human. So realistic. I loved Iruka. I loved Naruto.
J-Kid
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Wow, that was excellent. I'm glad I read this, I really enjoyed your portrayal of Iruka as a character and his position as a teacher and his interactions with Naruto.
IVIaedhros
2009-05-30 . chapter 1
I think I can feel a little warmer...good teachers rarely get enough recognition and Iruka is an unfortunate casualty of that rule...I ignore those Kakashi romances...
Ao yuki
2009-04-06 . chapter 1
Good fanfictions endure the test of time. *grins* And I have no doubt that this is one of the best fanfic out there.

It's great how you managed to make everything just flow so nicely, you know? Iruka and Naruto was both in character, and the way you write... *shakes head* Brilliant. Just brilliant.
Frathworth and Butts
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
An interesting take on Naruto's childhood and wonderfully written aswell! I really love the way you made Iruka take action and educate the boy instead of failing him. :D Iruka sure is one hell of a great person. Oh, how I love that man! ^_^ Your characters are incredibly IC and I can't just picture how Naruto simply stopped caring about what people think of him and especially the teachers, those basterds. D:
Your fic is wonderful and I'm putting it in my faves!
Have a great day!
//Butters
Water-Soter
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
Wow, nice. I loved the way you manage to characterized Naruto and Iruka, it fit very well with their personalities and how they would react to certain situations.
greengirl6
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
I reallyl liked this. Most fanfiction writers seemed to believe that Iruka liked Naruto from the moment he met him. The truth is complete opposite. I think you did really well representing this peice. Very nice.
Megol
2008-09-14 . chapter 1
Okay.

So I TOTALLY loved this fic.

It really does an excellent job of exploring the relationship (and beginning of) between Naruto and Iruka, I think. It was fun, engaging, and easy to read. And I had a HARD time finding any spot to stop once starting it. :'D Any minute interruption was too much!

So engaging.. I could really feel this story. It was, ah, just.

Awesomeness. xD
Thank you.
RedBrunja
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
Aww, Iruka. This is just about exactly how I see him in my head.
MysteryLady-Tx
2008-06-28 . chapter 1
OMG, this was BEYOND ADORABLE, I LOVED IT, it was so DAMN CUTE!

THANKS:"D
Muria
2008-06-18 . chapter 1
What an image... Naruto struggling with money problems as a child, being hated, and trying to get to class on time when his teachers hate him...

Very well written. Scarily plausible plot.
Creative Spark
2008-02-11 . chapter 1
Aw Iruka-Kun your so understanding... sort of, your on your way! This was well writen, I enjoyed the way you ended it.

-Spark
hakuse-kun
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
This was good. Quite well written.
tanith-4486
2007-12-29 . chapter 1
hmm... this is nice
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