Guh... @@;; Cuteness...

aw this is so adorible!

I love that it's clean too!

Tomonori and Tsukasa have such a beautiful father/son relationshop that you write beautifully

It's pretty good, and I read it over and noticed your writing much improved as time goes by. Only a few concerns. Merely that you point out many things that people who are reading pretty much have already guessed, facts that are already known. Such as how Kaname and Tsukasa call eachother by basic first names. Also that nobody seems overly worried that a basic lab experiment somehow morphed the DNA of a teenager. A school nurse even seemed to have the chmical knowledge to understand such scientific facts based upon a mere exam. I did enjoy the story though, and hope to see more Tsukasa fanfictions in the future.

SO Cute! (; The little Tsukasa is adorable! Write another! Write another! OK now I'm the one acting like a four year old *tee hee*

P.S I noticed a few typos

Very good job!

Its cute! Its one of the first fanfics i've eva read on and its really good!

what if the blood tests proves he's not human? but love the story little tsukasa!so cute!

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o_o UBER-AW! Yes, that ending WAS a little rushed, but it was ADORABLE regardless (honestly, that's probably JUST how I'd do it too...*sweatdrop*) I wouldn't want to attempt to write a sequel; I'd be too worried I wouldn't be able to keep up to this high standard that you've set! _ GREAT STORY!

it turned out to be an awesome story.

*Sighs* It over T.T...It was a really great and very cute story. I loved it. Nice ending as well. Although it did seem a little rushed, it's better than just leaving us hanging. Anyway I really enjoyed your story.

Sincerly,

Kisa

Aww... How cute! I loved this ending. It was very sweet. _ This story was great, and very interesting! Keep writing! I think I shall take a look at your original fiction as well! _

always,

el

That was pretty good. I can't get enough of the whole Tsukasa and ice cream thing. Although I am hoping something with Tsukasa's angel form happens. But either way this story is awesome and really cute.

-*Kisa

AW! I LOVE TSUKASA AND TOMONORI, THEY'RE SO CUTTEE! I always thought they were wonderful together as father and son!

great chapter!