I definitely prefer the alternate ending.

Then again, I'm not big on UsaMamo so that's kinda obvious for me. xD

Luved the story!

cool story

How fascinating. You know, I think I almost like the alternate ending better. Anyway, nice work! The plotline did get a tiny bit confusing at points, but this fic is well-written and interesting. Please keep up the good work!

Sorry, but I absolutely despise the idea of Usagi with anyone other than Mamoru so, last chapter, not of the good...

Aside from that, I think the fic was quite nice.

You know some parts are very confusing and others i completely despise because it makes the story dumb and full of stupid ideas.

Come on you could have done better than that!

i love it

It is really good but you got some of the names wrong in this chapter. Also you need a transition between chapter 6 and 7. Other than that it is really good and I can't wait to keep reading.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow amazing story! i loved all of it!

This was beautiful. I loved both endings very much. I'm glad she can finally be happy.

hey! i love this fanfic! it is so awesome. it was really cool of you to find out what some of the words were. i think out of the two endings, is that i liked the first ending more than the second one. i mean both ending are cool and all but its kinda weird lovin tow guys... well i think so..

anywhos, i hope to hear more fanfictions from you!

luvalie-wings

uh-oh..oh no..

lol pluto was so funny! some 'missing body parts'

wow heck with new york id take miami any day. sandy beaches, hotweather, shirtless guys, thats my kindda place.