hehe nifty. I didn't know there was a laby novel until i read this, but when I looked it up it costs like $50 O.o eep

I like this. It was new, short, and most definitely sweet. You should write more like it. :)

Wonderful story. You did wrap it up very nicely. Kudos.

Oy! This can't be the end- Please just let it be the end of the beginning!

As I told you before when I betaed, You cannot leave this like that! You have to continue! I demand a recount!, er... sequel, yeah! Sequel, sequel, sequel... _

Lovely story. Please write more!

Very very good fic!_

I liked this. It was really good... Is it the end?

aw... oh my god! its so so sweet yet also so sad... and kinda romantic! *sigh* please write a continuing chapter! its so good!

keep this up. I don't think, Jareth died at the end he loved Sara to much. I would like to see this continue

I really love this story and a am demanding a sequal.