That was lovely :D Your a wonderful writer. I love how your really portrayed the emotions of the characters and developed the relationship between Mulan and Shang. :D Amazing story!

I absolutely adored this story so much. Probably one of my favorite Mulan fics out there :D

Loved this story!

ah... dinner, the chapter that every fan fic like this must have. I really enjoyed reading this story! I was amazing! I love all of the plot twists people come up with!

when they were on the top of the boulder and they were fighting and mulan went to the edge saying push me off the cliff no one will know they will think it was an accident, and shang got up and starting walking toward her and she was thinking that he was really going to do it instead of him just going and saying "you should be at home, Mulan. you should have it him walking up kissing her i think that would have been better and more exciting.

awwww, great story!

Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!

You know, you are a fantastic writer. I hope you know that. :)

Just to say thanks for the great story. I really enjoyed reading this. Great job :-)

YAY! I love your stories!

You deserve a thousand rewards for what you've done for Mulan in the fans' hearts ! *big hug*

I'm your fan now. You can't do anything against it. :P

Through I have to say that the chapters 9 and 11 seemed rushed. But then again, I wouldn't have been to find anything better least to write it myself. Chapter 12 was a nice, accomplished end at my opinion. It was a pleasure to read all of it. Still, I did not feel satisfied with it because of the quickness of it all. I had expected a little par of foreplay to say it. Or something more Shang-like. Oh and.. I adore your Mulan as well ! (better than Walt D. as far as I am concerned with M2)

In sum, and despite the minors details, your fic is a treasure, a pure source of pleasure. You've given credit at the cartoon (and Disney should pad you for that) and created little fluffy blue cloud just for the each of us...

Can I stay forever ?

You choose to play with events adding there and removing there. In fact, you carved yourself the character's personalty and looks. They may already exists, but your fiction could have been read without having ever seen the cartoon (but of course, this would reduce a lot the pleasure I have reading this).

That was funny!

Very nice to read.

It was okay. But I can imagine how hard it must have been to find the right note for this chapter. And, well, it wasn't bad at all.