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monkeybait 5/8/05 . chapter 9
Wow! Awesome ending! I love your work, but I've read all your stories. When you finish "To Omashu!", there will be nothing left to read by you.

SO MAKE MORE OR I'LL KILL YOU.

Um... sorry. A bit threatening there. But please make more! This isn't an order, but a suggestion. A very forceful suggestion, but none the less a suggestion.
monkeybait 5/8/05 . chapter 6
Oh yeah, the hand turning white thing I forgot to talk about. Is she sort of the Avatar to? Also, I'm not seeing much of Aang. But that's okay.

Um...

I hope you don't mind me saying this, 'cause I badly need reviews, but do you think you could read my story sometime? Just part of it's okay, because, not to brag, it's really long. I mean really. I didn't know how to divvy it up into chapters, which was kind of a whoopsy.

It's really funny though. I did it differently than the TV series, but I'll admit, I used there ideas. Only I added on a few characters myself. And don't forget to review it!

That is... if you ever read it.

Oh, and keep up the good writing work! I'd better get back to reading, too.
monkeybait 5/8/05 . chapter 5
Oh! I sense a little Li/Sokka love. Fortunately, they never tell each other.

THANK GOD. SAPPY IS NOT MY THING.

Sorry. I still love your story. Really good! The cliffhanger is totally leaving me anxious, so this is all I'll say: if it's not done, WRITE MORE!
monkeybait 5/8/05 . chapter 3
OMG.

A shapeshifter, eh? Yes, I love shapeshifting. It's the most awesome. Definetaly.

YES! I ADMIT I! IT ROCKS!

Okay, sorry. Freak out there. But I do that sort of thing.

Expect more posts!

Author formally known as banana.

P.S. That Li is quite a character. You made a good person.
monkeybait 5/8/05 . chapter 2
I've already started chapter two and you've already drawn me in! You astound me once again, Xlo. This won't be the last review you see, so be prepared!

OMG! Another Airbender! Everyone does this sort of thing, but you make interesting. I'll keep reading now.

Author formally known as banana (sorry, I forgot to say, banana is my name)
Wolf of Fire 5/4/05 . chapter 8
this is a cool story nice job i cant wait for the next chapter! update soon please
Xlo 5/1/05 . chapter 5
Because I'm evil! Mwhahahahaha! Don't worry though. The next chapter will probably be up soon. When there's not much else to do on a rainy day, you'd be surprised at what I do.

"LET ME OUT OF THE CLOSET!"

Uh oh, she's out of the restraints! Better board up the door!
Hokagehime S.E 4/30/05 . chapter 3
why'd ya have to end it RIGHT at the good part! Good story though.
Hokagehime S.E 4/26/05 . chapter 1
Oh lying! My OC lies too! YAY LYING! Weell...can't wait for your next chappie :)
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