 Deklats Desserts 9/18/08 . chapter 1It looks like you haven't written any Voyager stuff in a while, but I'd really like to request a sequel to this piece in which you show Chakotay's reaction. Pretty please? |
 Geek Squared 1307 6/13/07 . chapter 1Great job! This is so sad. I love the way you write.
G.S.1307 |
 PenguinMage 5/6/02 . chapter 1*grops around keyboard teary eyed trying to type*
*sniff*
That was so sad, I could see her, and hear her, doing this. And that last line...It was just so perfet. |
 Kiki the Tiki Sorceress from the Resort Holoprogram 7/1/01 . chapter 1 *sniff* so beautiful. You are very crafty with your words and can spark that emotional fire. If there was one thing to pick at, it's that Janeway never gives (and Chakotay there is no way). This needs and craves for a sequel...stories aren't supposed to end like that! |
 Danielle Smiley-Face 6/26/01 . chapter 1OMG this is heartrending! But wonderfully done... so great, what Kathryn did! But so sad that she's there all alone. Lovely though, really. Danielle :-) |
 Malykyn 4/7/01 . chapter 1Whoa... that's all I'm going to say. Whoa... |
 Bil 4/5/01 . chapter 1Wow... A beautiful (and gloriously sad (yes, I know that's an odd way of putting it)) story. Very Kathryn Janeway. I especially like that last sentence. |
 Katie Lea Jade 3/31/01 . chapter 1 Well done. Though it was terribly sad, I enjoyed it. |
 Robin 3/26/01 . chapter 1 I get the feeling I have read this before... Have you published it someplace else? Regardless, it's so touching that it almost made me cry... and I'm the hard-core military girl who doesn't cry, so indeed, that's an accomplishment! Well done! |
 Ruse 3/25/01 . chapter 1::sniffle:: That was so sad...I couldn't stand that and I hope TPTB don't do that. But it was my style of reading. I gravitate towards and like stories like this. It sounded very in character. Great job! |
 Usagibuffy 3/25/01 . chapter 1 Woah! How sad! You can almost hear the pain in her voice as she recrds this last log. Good work. |
 Leisetta Whes 3/24/01 . chapter 1 thats sooo sad! |
 LadyChakotay 3/24/01 . chapter 1*fumbles blurry-eyed through objects on the computer desk looking desperately for a tisse* Oh YOWZA! That was an incredibly depressing, entirely desolate, yet incredibly lovely story. Poignant and unsettling. Nicely done. |