 Mappadouji 2008-10-03 . chapter 1Fantastic! this story is just absolutely perfect. |
 FluffyBiscuits 2007-11-28 . chapter 1I think this is in character for the alternate Vicky. She would be attracted to someone that can stand up to her. |
 avearia 2006-03-19 . chapter 1O.K. a LITLEE late on the review. Forgive me, oh great one.
Nice oneshot. The title made me think for a second that it wasn't vicky, but I finally convinced myself that it was when she said 'i do not like butterflies'. It was such a cute oneshot!
Older, mature Timmy Turner. We-eird. he's just way too mature for me. :P. Glad you didn't leave it without a joke or two, though. FOP is all about the jokes.
Great story! Oh, and to let you know, Vicky wasn't out of character at all, in my opinion.
Kudos. |
 MikariStar 2006-02-04 . chapter 1I really liked this story. I don't think it was out of character, it takes place in the future so a lot of things must hav changed by then. |
 Melissa Norvell 2005-07-05 . chapter 1I have to say, you have much talent . I wish you luck in your future accomplishments. I'm new to fanfics here, and decided to read around and see what stuff is in this section. I wrote my first fanfic and I'd like it if you would read mine and tell me how I'm doing. |
 Eternal Silence 2005-04-28 . chapter 1Wow...simply amazing. You are extremely talented, I have to put this story on my favorite's. You have such a way with words its...amazing.
I once thought of writing something like this, cuz that part of CC dose kind of make you think. (I even thought of the V/T thing and even of making them have a kid, but they kept the fact that Timmy was the dad a secret) I mean Vicky trusted him the most and he betrayed her. It makes you think, how did she feel about that? Especially when you have a mind like me and you think of the possibility of her falling for Timmy.
Anyways the way Vicky's feelings were described for this was incredible, and the way Timmy acted seemed to fit the older him. They didn't seem OOC at all. I mean don't you think Vicky(the older Vicky in CC)would try to stay strong, and appear emotionless? But than you know the way Vicky gets when she's in love, so her giving in was believable. Also the part abut Vicky not wanting to surrender seemed like her.
Hopefully Timmy wasn't just using her. But than he did save her life so I guess he really dose care about her.
Oh and don't know if you noticed, but Vicky seemed a little psychotic in the movie (well at least she did to me).
Well keep up the good work, and hopefully you will write another FOP fic. (If you need ideas just ask).
Oh and if you want, could you check out my stories? |
 Sulphur-skin 2005-04-26 . chapter 1Great story! One of the best I've ever read, your a really great author, and I hope you do continue this story. The vocabulary was superb, and the way you structured the story just left me wanting more and more of the story. I can't wait to read the rest of your works |
 Quandtuniverse 2005-04-26 . chapter 1uh... |
 soulful-sin 2005-04-25 . chapter 1Wow...just wow. It's been a long time since a story impressed me that much.
*Very* good writing, very interesting take on the alternate future of Channel Chasers that none of us has had even cross their minds. I honestly have no other words for this, since they would mar the story to be uttered.
Just, damn... |
 Squirrel Tamer 2005-04-25 . chapter 1I’m guessing that this is just a one-shot, but I’m not positive, but it’d be amazing if it wasn’t, because this story is just...wow. When I originally clicked it I figured it was going to be a cliched TootiexTimmy elaboration on the end of CC, but I was oh so very wrong.
The characters (Timmy especially) are out of character for the show, but then again people grow up and mature and I think this could have been quite possible considering the circumstances seen in the beginning of CC. And personally this is pretty much how I imagine Timmy and Vicky as they get older...But maybe that’s just because of how big of a fan I am of the coupling.
But really...its sweet and sarcastic and despite how much Vicky and Timmy are supposed to hate each other it makes a lot of sense. I really loved this. Thank-you for the amazing read. |