very cute! i love it!..though they may be a bit OC..I don't care...coz it's uber cute! thanks for a good read!

aw!! ^_^ So adorable! *adds to favorites* hope to see mroe of your works in the future!

Well, I actually liked it better than the first chapter... Yay!
It was so funny. Though "inner Nuriko" seemed to have lots of werid comments.
And I just loved so many lines from this. It's great. When Sanji was making Miaka all that food I was just...Yay!! M, now I'm hungry. Yay! Happy, happy, happy. Hm, food...
It's your own fault for writing about it [gr]
And why did Zoro and Nuriko go to sea?
I also liked the part where Miaka asked Nuriko if she would be as happy when she married Tamahome and Nuriko said she'd be happier and Miaka said good and Nuriko was like wha? Nice run-on no?
Oh, and Miaka's "happy, psyched up voice" about Hotohori and Nuriko's wedding was dead on I think.
I thought it had a lot of unique words. You didn't just write "said"; you have a good vocabulary.
It might not be Hotohori x Nuriko fluff but it sure it amusing.
Yay! m
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Ra Ra Ra! Cheers for the happy couple! *wipes eyes with handkerchief* This is so wonderful... Would you really qualify this as malexmale? Because, really, Nuriko is a woman at heart...

Bravo! So adorable and fluffy! =^-^= Do you think you could write a follow-up fic of the wedding? Plz?

I must admit out of everything I've written *this* one is probably my favorite. (Quality and content ^_~.)

AW! thats SO KAWAII! I LUV NURIKO & HOTOHORI!! that was without a doubt a fav ^^ great job! - ja!

AW! AW!! This is a really nice story!

Oh, where to start? I have so much to ramble about. I'll just drive right in.
Marriage huh? Is that legal there? I mean he's the emperor so it shouldn't matter.. Here's to legalizing gay marriage! Really it's all about love.
Uh, hon what ...um...this is so...well fluffy. You er very Nuriko-ish. It reads just like something Nuriko would write.
Oh yes. AW it's it sweet? Aw, so cute!! :)
This FY story almost makes me want to post one I wrote once. And no it's not happy or nice. In fact I bet you + 6 others would be offended by it. ~_-
I wasn't sure if Hiko no Uta meant Flight's Song. Hiko DOES infact mean flight. If that's the case it would make Hiko Seijioru a great name for the Hiten Mitsurgi Ryuu (that's style. means dragon in attacks). It's a very "heaven-dragon-ish" sword style. Though I don't think the kanji for Hiko's name is the same as the hiko in your title. I checked. And no this that nothing to do with your story. It's your fault for putting "hiko" in the title. :)
OH Hotohori with the sake...Er, yeeah. Hon, that is well...funny. Heh. Heh.
Title: Hiko no Uta. Flight's song. Well there's the Japanese name pun and there is the whole ~flying~.
Oh yeah I "completely understand this…as “twisted” as it has become." Heck, yeah.
Also it took me a while to read this since I was busy recommending your writing to the vast electrnic nothing of the internet.
Yeah. Cute, sweet and MY God I had a lot of comments as I read! ~_-

Aw :-) I love Hoto/Nuri fluff!! Write more of it!! There just isn't enough!!