Cool story! I really like the concept and the whole forbidden love thing you have going on. The ending was really cute too. My guess would be that Riku's dad is actually Aion but that's just a guess. I'm curious as to where you were planning to go with this since it seems like awhile since you updated. Were Kuronue and Riku gonna get their memories back? Were any other series chars gonna show up? Hopefully my speculations give you some inspiration to give this story another try. The only thing I can even think of criticism-wise is that you gave Kuronue a middle name and they don't really do that in Japan. Other than that this was awesome!

i love it and look forward to the next chapter

HA! Clasic moment!

Hey I hope you didn't abandon this wonderful fic. It's soo awesome. plz continue.

Hey finish this! It's unbearably cute and funny!

sorry i dint finish my other one, but y arent you finishing your story?!!?!?!?!?

HEY! I love this story

hey weres the rest ?!?!?!?!?!?!

This is reallie interesting. Update I wanna read more! Great story, though there are a very grammer mistakes but that's fineit's still a great story. Ja ne!

Awesome story cant wait for the rest!

very intreaging! I love it! *watches you*

hey this is really interresting cant wait to see what happenes