I love it! Soo realistic, or tammyistic or whatever you want to call it. I love it. Poor Owen! He's so cool, and this is so well done that it makes him even cooler! WOW!!

I liked your story, sometimes fluff can be too suffocating. Could you please tell me the name of Lord Wyldon's youngest daughter? I missed it. Thanks again.

This is an interesting display of events. I enjoy the way you portray it as if it's a dream that fades in and out which you can't really understand.
Callie

Most interesting. Had me guessing to the end - I loved the line:

'Snap, go the twigs. Snap, goes her neck.'

That just stopped me dead...I honestly thought she dead for a few seconds.

Hannah

Best Ordeal-fic ever. I need to compile a list of them, for my site.

Fenella, don't you dare kill off Teresa! I don't care if she's canon or not. I like your Cavalls better than anything that TP herself might choose to come up with. Good thing your girl refuses to bow out so easily.

This was very good. I liked the way you made me realize it was a dream/vision only gradually. I figured out it was an Ordeal about halfway through. The last half in particular worked really well to convey the disjointed way that dreams feel when they're happening to you, with the heightened emotions that feel completely real.

I liked that the moment Owen went to break the rules and speak was the moment the chamber found him worthy and released him. It was so Owen.

--Imogen

wait, what is the canon name? I never knew.
this story, or rather, one-shot is very good. i luv it

ooh wow. this was amazing. i was like freaking out because i thought Teresa really did die. holy crap man. though this was a terrific story! GOOD JOB!! very, very, nice one-shot. definetly one of my favs!

why does Tamora need a canon for Wyldon's daughter? is she going to write about her? so very confused.

Good story. Very good angst and characterization. Very good view from Owen's point of view. nice touch at the end with the chamber...very likely situation. Great fic! Write more great stories!

So here I go: good bawl into the review box.

(WAHH!)

She killed Teresa. (The plot bunnies have been put to rest.) You should have Owen run TP through with a jousting lance for her lousy naming abilities.

And poor Owen... This ordeal was hell compared to Alanna's, and now he has to marry she-who-shall-not-be-named (-till-later).