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| xXxUnReQuitEdxXx 2006-06-24 ch 9, | abuseTouching story |
| Liby 2005-09-13 ch 37, anon. | abuseA lovely ending to a lovely story. I'm late because I was without internet for a while. I've enjoyed your whole series and I'll wait patiently for your next installment. |
| Courtney 2005-09-06 ch 37, anon. | abuseI'm so sad it's over!! But I loved it! Great end to a great story!! I can't wait until your next one comes out! Loved the ending with Brennan and Shal! Nice job! |
| Tunder28 2005-09-05 ch 37, | abuseGreat work on that chapter. really enjoyed it. Update soon if you havent ended it there. Please update. |
| loveconquers 2005-09-05 ch 37, anon. | abuseThank you for such a long chapter! It was such a perfect ending. The final reunion between Shalimar and the rest of the family was heart-wrenching and joyful all at once. I'm glad you added the scene with Bobby and Jubes as well to wrap up that plot line. I was curious to see if you would address it again; I'm glad you didn't forget! I was also happy to see you address Evie's growing power. I wonder if we'll see more of this in the next installment. The ending was so tender, I absolutely loved it. After I read this chapter, I had to go back and re-read the earlier stories in this series as well. I skimmed through them all in a few hours, and loved them all over again. Thank you for such a wonderful series and for your dedication to quality writing. I'll be eagerly watching for your next story whenever you are able to write it! Thank you so much! |
| loveconquers 2005-09-05 ch 36, anon. | abuseAll the pain and tension was worth it for that ending. It was beautiful! The wait and build-up just exploded for Brennan and ended when he finally got to hold her in his arms again. When they sank to the floor, my heart was in my throat. You captured the emotion and the pain and the relief and the overwhelming love of that moment so wonderfully. It was everything I hoped it would be and more. Beautifully written! I never tire of your handiwork. Thank you! |
| bohemianbabe 2005-09-04 ch 37, anon. | abuseaw i'm ready to cry! that was so beautiful! only 4 more stories?! oh i do hope that you come up with more ideas than they will hold! you are such a good writer! lotta love martana |
| cflynn214 2005-09-04 ch 37, | abuseAnother great chapter.. Please update soon |
| cflynn214 2005-09-03 ch 36, | abuseAnother great chapter.. I am so glad everything seems to be working out.. Please update soon. |
| Tunder28 2005-09-03 ch 36, anon. | abuseYES!! Finally they get close. Thank you. I've been grinding my teeth trying to think of this moment. very good work. please dont say thats the end and please if its not. Let the next chapter be quick. |
| Tunder28 2005-09-03 ch 35, anon. | abuseoMG. Very good work. i enjoyed it and i'm loving it even more. |
| Courtney 2005-09-02 ch 36, anon. | abuseI found this chapter right away after you posted it! I loved it so much! I loved the reunion between Brennan and Shalimar! So romantic and well worth teh wait! I am so happy she remembers him again. Never stop writing please! :) |
| Courtney 2005-09-02 ch 35, anon. | abuseI love your story so much! I'm so happy you updated with not one, but two chapters! A great start to my weekend! :) Glad to see some of the pain has been wiped away. I wonder what will happen next. Off to read more! |
| loveconquers 2005-09-02 ch 35, anon. | abuseCongrats on finishing the final scene! That's such a good feeling! :) Bittersweet relief I think. I don't know if there is only one chapter left or a few more, so I'm not sure if things are truly better now or if things are not all what they seem to be! I really love how Jean and Evie are conspiring to help Charles now, after he has helped so many. Should be an interesting attempt! Thank you so much for the update! |
| jessica 2005-09-02 ch 35, anon. | abuseI was very happy to read more but I'm hungry :), I want more! please don't let us wait that long, please update if you can! (You're the best!) |