Nice! Different from the norm, update when u can. ^^

Interesting. Your style is quite different. Very rooted to a "gamer" style that gives it some comedy at points. Definatly a good trait making you entertaining to read. Yes you are a good author and set a nice pace for the story, not too fast with nicely cut chracters. Attitudes (especially Tifa's) are very amusing and you leave everyone guessing who's shoes someone will take. I do hope you continue to surprise us and write the next chapter. Until then I'll keep you on alert.
Great job!

Shadow Story

SO far its cool, I love how its portrayed, keep up the good work!

I am interested in how you will portray this story as it continues, very intriguing ideas behind this story. I look forward to seeing it continued.

Funny and strange... I like it. Definately getting added to my Favorite Stories List. Keep it up.

Nice...

Tifa as the main cold character is intresting to see and Cloud beeing gay is funny.

rock on.

This story is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! Keep it up!

This was kind of funny and strange... like me, I hope you continue it just so I can figure out if you are a good author or not.