GOOD GOD ATEM! WAS IT THAT MUCH OF A SURPRISE!
I knew it was Latifah from the first minute Atem had a bad feeling.

*sigh*
I was correct.
Jericho was nothing but trouble.

...Is Jericho getting conked on the head with something every chapter?

That's a nice ending. A great way to close it. I'm looking forward to finish reading the third part.

WOW! That is SO cool! Esther is my name! LOL

Actually "father's" taking a 30 year long nap to wake up when he's semi-reincarnated. *giggles* Nice ender. Keep writing!

*whistles* Nicely done. Quick and to the point. Good interpretation of the MW arc. Keep writing!

Very beautiful! Update soon, keep up the good work!!

Esther's mother sees Jade, right? Nice chap. Keep writing!

Oh! You finally update! yay! Everyone cheer!! Great chap, wasn't what I was expecting at all. Keep writing!

keep going- update please

Oh, poor Esther. Update soon, please.

That's so sad...

Eep! This is getting intense. I can see the plot unfolding here and I hope I'm wrong about the course it will take. Enjoy your spring break! I'll look forward to an update upon your return.

does this have anything to do with kaiba and tea!