GREAT story line, your OC was very UN mary-sue like which i enjoyed. Her character was real enough (seeing as thats basically how Darth Maul would have treated a lover and how one would be forced to accept that). All in all i enjoyed it and i don't enjoy many fanfics.

Grammer was a BIT dodgy though...

very good story

Well her boyfriend is not comming back and please write a sequel to show her grieving for Maul.

I really,really like Darth Maul romance fictions!It just seems so right,I mean he's pretty hot!Wait,did I say hot?What I meant was HOT!=^.^= Meow!

That was kinda cool.

Great story. Hope you will write a sequel.

i love it!

Really really cool.

That was a good one-shot!

I really get a kick out of Darth Maul fanfics (I am currently writing one right now). A very cute little story...

*thinks to self*
CUTE!?? SEX WAS INVOLVED DARN IT!

XD

this is good I must say. Rather unusual, to change POV, and it's all for the best!
I guess I'll write something of the kind one day or the other (I already have, actually, but not with starwars). I do think you should write another chapter (even though this seems to be a one shot) about this and I just adore this kind of relationship and this female character of yours. She herself is also much more colorful than any other of the "normal" saga (sorry to amidala and leia but apart from "I will not cooperate" and "I don't know where you take your dilusion laser-brain" and the usual I love U thing, they dont have much to say)

good job, write sum more