What? No! You've ruined my happy fantasy! *Sighs* Well, I suppose I had to face reality sometime. Very well written, I applaud you. Even if you are a fantasy ruiner. ;-)

Awe... cute but sad.

ur an amazing writer. my dad writes books and even he said it was good. u could really have a bright future in this best wishes

Too sad Kat! I can't take the sad ones! I usually don't read them but sometimes by accident I do and then I have to read a happy story to forget. So now to find a happy story or start a long new one...possibly an Agent Smith one as I have only read a few of those! You wrote it good though!