 JonnysGal101 2009-12-05 . chapter 10 I love all your stories this one is very deep like it is actually hapening |
 dg19 2006-06-25 . chapter 10I really love your story. Update real soon. |
 Samantha-kun 2006-06-14 . chapter 10this is amazing, as was the first one! Update soon! :) |
 Emma 2006-05-06 . chapter 10 I love it so far! it's even as good as the first one!! keep going por favor (please on spanish lol, simple things...) |
 Elven Dragon Rider 2005-10-24 . chapter 10 I was reading the first 1(the fic b4 this one) nwhen i finished it, i was like O.O THERE'S GOT 2 B A SEQUAL! so i checked ur profile n stuff n voila! i really luv this fic (n the other1). I think u can really get Dallys character right, i mean, i think he acts like what he would've said in the book. I dunno, how 2 explain it, i'm no good with words...but i can put it in simple words...UPDATE SOON! :) |
 Mignun 2005-08-29 . chapter 10i love this story, please continue it |
 TheGirlWithKaleidoscopeEyes 2005-08-13 . chapter 10great job! update soon!! :)(: |
 xSketchy.and.Spunkx 2005-08-12 . chapter 10Omg this was the saddest chapter ever. But I still loved it. I hate funerals too :( But you wrote it well. Steph has so much respect for her brother. I love the way you wrote this chapt lol. |
 CrazyAlchemistgrl017 2005-08-10 . chapter 10Aw! The story is so cute!! I read the other one and its cute!! Lol anyways I loved this chapter it was sad and I'm like 'omg thats so sad' and stuff, lol. Anyways good job and please update soon ok!! Cant wait to read more!! |
 BlackLightningDX 2005-08-05 . chapter 10Ok, seriously, her mother... who the hell shoved the WHOLE flag pole up her butt?!?!?!?!
lmao, dont take it the wrong way, but the whole thing keeps leaving me wanting to yell "PAY ATTENTION!"
XD Update a.s.a.p! |
 swordandplanet 2005-08-05 . chapter 10You have no idea how much my heart welled just reading that last little bit of this chapter |
 Dreamer for lyf 2005-08-05 . chapter 10Did I review the last chapter? That one part about the wind reminded me of my fic "Gone like the Wind" Did you ever read that? Hm... Stupid people took it off cuz I has an 'over extended authors note'. Yeah, sure. I think I am going to post it again. Well, loved the chapter. Hope you UDS
-DFL |
 Miru Amai 2005-08-05 . chapter 10thats cool. awe, so sweet. i know i hate funerals too. I've only ever been to one though. but i don't think i can ever go to another. keep up the good work alright? |
 EnragedLover1491 2005-08-05 . chapter 10that was a rewally good chapter the mom and montana are such ** |
 blackmagic111090 2005-08-05 . chapter 10love the chapeter i'm really happy you didn't ave her wear black but instead symbolize something dear to her like that well luv ya bi |