beautifully tragic.. made me tear up.. i liked how they were each others last words... great fic xxx

so sad! but still briliant, i really liked it

*Sigh* you know I'm reading this again and its still sad. I really do hate you Tomo. And to people who read it in the future, The comment that dude said about her not having read the first volume was quite mistaken. I know she read it because I lent it to her and we frequently gush over the Ren/Rai-ness. There really wasn't that much oc and she wrote this before the second one even came out so I can saftly say that this is the best Diabolo fic on the topic of Ren and Rai going Diabolo that could have ever been written

This review never happened Tomo.

That was so sad, I can't believe I actually cried. You really shocked me, you had the perfect opportunity to insert a lemon and you didn't? Amazing story, the manga could have learned a thing or two from you...

P.S. I MADE A RHYME!

This is a good story, but _extremely_ AU. Have you read Vol. I? It has excellent tidbits on RaixRen and pretty pretty pictures

You would likely get more reviews if you posted this in the general Misc. section where the other Diabolo fics are.