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Reviews For: He Said, She Said

weirdtaste
2005-04-28
ch 1,
abusesad, depressing, dark, beautiful, well-written, touching, what's not to like?
liz
2005-04-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseso achingly wonderful...i really loved the range of emotions expressed throughout. great job.
AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva
2005-04-27
ch 1,
abuseI loved this! Very, very much. Great style, Grammar, spelling, and mechanics are good. And the characters were spot-on. Great work!
raingarcia022
2005-04-27
ch 1,
abuseEvery single event is like a piece of heartbreak. I love it, especially the part where Claire comes in and you do it with "Her name is Claire". The impact is tremendous.

I'd agree about the songs -- I love them both, the songs, but even if they did give this story some breaks, I would've preferred it without the songs. This is a great story, though, so that was barely noticeable.

Great job. I can't hardly wait to read more from you.
Cyclone2
2005-04-26
ch 1,
abuseWow. That was so...wow. You had me completely captivated for the 15 minutes it took me to read this. Your writing is so powerful that I could almost feel those odd and even angles jarring into me. Brilliantly done - congragulations!
Mallory
2005-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow, this is great, I love it! Very compelling and enjoyable to read. I would probably remove the lyrics, because they're very intrusive and break your concentration (you don't wanna break your reader's concentration). I generally don't read song fics because of that (just skipping the lyrics - which I always do - throws you off). But other than the lyrics it's great. Congrats!
The Madhatter2
2005-04-25
ch 1,
abuseWow. Talk about angst. I love it. I love the other side of the relationship. The sorrow, the pain, the bitterness of it all. The snippets of their lives and Stella's anger is just beautiful. This is wonderful. I honestly can't get enough.
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