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| weirdtaste 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abusesad, depressing, dark, beautiful, well-written, touching, what's not to like? |
| liz 2005-04-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseso achingly wonderful...i really loved the range of emotions expressed throughout. great job. |
| AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI loved this! Very, very much. Great style, Grammar, spelling, and mechanics are good. And the characters were spot-on. Great work! |
| raingarcia022 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abuseEvery single event is like a piece of heartbreak. I love it, especially the part where Claire comes in and you do it with "Her name is Claire". The impact is tremendous. I'd agree about the songs -- I love them both, the songs, but even if they did give this story some breaks, I would've preferred it without the songs. This is a great story, though, so that was barely noticeable. Great job. I can't hardly wait to read more from you. |
| Cyclone2 2005-04-26 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was so...wow. You had me completely captivated for the 15 minutes it took me to read this. Your writing is so powerful that I could almost feel those odd and even angles jarring into me. Brilliantly done - congragulations! |
| Mallory 2005-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, this is great, I love it! Very compelling and enjoyable to read. I would probably remove the lyrics, because they're very intrusive and break your concentration (you don't wanna break your reader's concentration). I generally don't read song fics because of that (just skipping the lyrics - which I always do - throws you off). But other than the lyrics it's great. Congrats! |
| The Madhatter2 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. Talk about angst. I love it. I love the other side of the relationship. The sorrow, the pain, the bitterness of it all. The snippets of their lives and Stella's anger is just beautiful. This is wonderful. I honestly can't get enough. |