|Reviews for Fly Away|
| Silvara 10/16/07 . chapter 1
So soft. A feather-like touch...
This was... grand.
Thank you for the beauty of these instants.
| SilverWolf-Ryuki 6/8/05 . chapter 1
Not exactly like the manga... only if the manga was like your story, though. -siigh- If only that happened.
Anyways. Great story, beautifully written. Very good um, what are those? metaphores? or the other thing... I should have paid attention to my English classes... -sigh-
I love this. xDD
| AnimeFreak 5/6/05 . chapter 1
That almost made me cry!
Loved it though!
| Ilvinaeda 4/28/05 . chapter 1
A great fic. Definitely not a rambling of sorts.
1) I thought the greatest thing about this fic was the way you portrayed Kagura. Although she is a rather stuck-up priss in the show sometimes, when you look at her defiance in another light, I can see the world from her eyes...and I agree that she'd rather be free of Naraku and his ilk than have to serve them for all of her damned life-span.
Of course, life isn't always so kind...
2) Another part I thought was really cool was the part where she sees the sparrow, and tries to convey her desires and emotions to it. Funny how a simple little bird could have everything Kagura really wanted, just by being itself...
3) Lastly, I really liked the way it ended...because in some ways, it's doubtful that Kagura would be able to get along with the other groups...and I particularly like the resolution that death offers in such stories.
Reminds me of the quote that really started me on angst in general...
"For it is all part of the great cycle;"
"And in death we are reborn anew."
I think it was from a Magic: The Gathering card...but I could be mistaken...
But yeah...it gives her a chance to be reborn...and hopefully, to be reborn as free as the wind she played with, at the tips of her fingers...maybe a sparrow. _
Simply beautiful. Keep writing!
| LaDyPnAi 4/26/05 . chapter 1
aw this is sad but you write good i like the detail you put and not how other people write were it takes a most of the story of describing stuff
| Sabriel41 4/26/05 . chapter 1
Oh, the tears... This is a lovely present, KK... you've an excellent grasp on Kagura's desperation and acceptance. The mention of the sparrow, and Rin's daisy chain are beautiful little details that just add a vibrancy to your story... and Sesshoumaru, at the last...
Just gorgeous. Thank-you so much...
| Servant of Grimmjow 4/26/05 . chapter 1
| niki-chan2 4/26/05 . chapter 1
Ooh, I loved this. I actually wrote a stroy along the same lines, and it's really interesting to see someone elses take on it! Read mine if you're interested, and if not, keep up the great work!