That was so cute! It's actually a nice topic to talk about since nobody every even wrote anything similar to it. It's kinda like something that no one would actually think of writing about...

Very sweet. I liked it.
Looking forward to that story you mention about Roy and family! ^^
~nintendo nut1

Aw... how sweet... EliwoodxNinian forever!

Beautiful, that's really the best word that comes to mind. I'm a bit surprised this is the first story to deal with that particular topic regarding Eliwood and Ninian. This should be required reading for all shippers of that couple.

Actually, I'd planned on doing a story similar to this, but I guess you beat me to it. Gotta get off my lazy butt and actually work sometime.

"It ... hurts. That you didn't see me ..."

I love that line. It bloody near broke my heart. Just like the game.

Kudos to you.

-Phantom Kensai

SO sweet. I love the mixture of angst and cuteness in this one. (heart)