An excellent story. I would like to see a sequel done to answer the left over questions? Like what is going to happen to Omi? Will he and Aya ever going to get their revenge? How do Yoji and Ken take events?

Great story. I would love a sequel. Please continue the story line. Thanks.

Why is Muraki so interested in getting rid of Omi? First he tells him that he would have been a good student under him, and then he sets uo this thing at the college to get rid of him. In the end he seems willing to train Michalik to get rid of him, even though he knows that he is next on Michalik's list. However Michalik is dumb if he really thinks that Muraki is going to train a student to the level where he could defeat him. I figure Muraki knows that Omi is going somewhere to get training, and figures Michalik is a great way to test how good he has gotten since he's been gone. Weiss really is falling apart. They are now down to two orginal members. Who is going to take Omi's spot? Does he tell Ken and Yoji good-bye too, or does he leave that to Aya? Also Omi is going to end up in a lot trouble for just taking off. Is Kritiker going to send someone to look for him? Also I assume that Omi is going to be gone one or two YEARS and not one or two TEARS.

Intersting start to a story. Both sides trying to get Omi to trust them. Though why is Yoji wanting Ommi to become a better man. Has he done something to make the others question him? He always came across as the stablizing influence of the group in the anime. Has that changed? Also Yoji can't complain about Omi that much. considering how he acts.

Great story. Can't wait for the sequel. Though I must admit to being an Aya/Omi fan.

That ending was creepy! Yikes. I hope there's a sequel in the works -- you can't leave the story off there!

Wow! This is really an awesome story! It's quite interesting. I really enjoy it lot. *gives brownies* Well all I can say is I wonder how Michalik is going to have his revenage on Omi...hmm...Good JOB~ =^-^=

sounds interesting. i've always wondered what it would be like should omi have other abilities, much like schwartz

well now, that's an intriguing start

Muraki, you say? ...It didn't click and I have YnM #5 sitting beside me... Explains the molestation of Omi >.>

...What I am confused about is... with such great writing... I find it strange to find flaws. Aya? More missions than any of the others? When Omi made his first kill by eleven years of age? He was the founding member of fourth gen Weiss [Fifth? ...meh..]... It sounds somewhat like the designs are the Gluhen designs, so I'm wondering about the time period... M, there was something else, too, but I'm not sure what it was. I can't remember off hand.

Otherwise, good story, unique in comparison to other Weiss stories I've read. And... Poor Weiss... having encountered Muraki...

~Amy

Is it just my imagination, or is this really based on the movie The Craft? And for some reason I keep thinking of Dr Muraki from Yami no Matsuei whenever you describe the 'witchdoctor'.

~eyes the three boys~ Hn. Omi would be better off as a Solitary rather than falling in with their crowd.

The doctor from Omi's dream had to be Muraki from Yami no Matsuei! That exsplains Aya's eyesight. Because Aya & Tsuzuki both have the same color eyes. Cool plot twist. And the scene in the book store was in the Craft too!! I love that movie, so I hope you'll update soon. See ya!!

hm...makes me think of the movie The Craft. Is that where you got the idea from? Anyway, very cool story! How did Aya become blind? I can't wait to know. I'm off to read the next chapter!! BYE!

o! Omi's playing w/ supernatural forces. interesting characters you got there. Thumbs up!

I just love it!! i want to know whats going to happen next *o*