|Reviews for The New Robot|
| Starbat 1/2/06 . chapter 1
Wow. I really like this story. I admit I'm not too familiar with the show itself, but from what I've seen, you seem to have captured it quite well. However, if I may make one criticism regarding the plot, I thought that Xander crashing his spacecraft right into the bedroom of the only teenage robot in the area was a little too "convenient". I didn't really buy it. Other than that, it was great!
| CoyoteLoon 5/3/05 . chapter 3
Hey, sorry it took so long for me to get to this. I apologize for being so slow! Anyway, it's a very interesting story you've got here! I like the way it ended - somehow I'm getting the feeling that we really don't know the full story about Xander and what happened to his planet. And for some reason, I have a creepy feeling that something bad is going to happen to Jenny.
You've done a very good job at writing, dialog and storytelling. If you don't mind a bit of criticism - sometimes, I was a bit confused while trying to follow what was happening, or who was speaking, and I had to re-read some sections. I think your writing got better in the second and third installments. Still, never be afraid to add a little extra description to slow down the pace, establish the "feel" of your story, and help keep the characters in-character. Other than that, great job!
| Coolcatjas 5/3/05 . chapter 3
AWW! That's it? well, for now I guess... But still, I hate waiting. I'm not good at waiting! I am already CRAZY! So you beter stop reading this review and start writing your new story, NOW!
| yingyanggirl 5/3/05 . chapter 3
that was awesome! *applauses* cant wait for the next story.
| crashfourit 5/3/05 . chapter 3
Interesting... What, no Cluster? Jenny's goin' to get a new body, Interesting... Where's Brad and Tuck?
| yingyanggirl 4/28/05 . chapter 2
wow that was deep. I'm glad you at least put a little j/s in.
| Coolcatjas 4/28/05 . chapter 2
Aww, that is so sad! PLZ continue! I need to know more! When will he restore his love? Hoplefuly soon
So UPDATE ASAP!
I hate being quiet, but.. i have nothing to say...
| crashfourit 4/28/05 . chapter 2
Interesting chapters. Wow, Mechanopolis was great with technology. Xander is prety bumbed out about the girl. I hope Dr. Wakeman can help.
| Coolcatjas 4/26/05 . chapter 1
WOW FOUR CHAPTERS IN ONE UPDATE! You are freakn' COOL! Is this a Sheldon/Jenny romance or something? Me likey your story. update SOON.
Random-ness is the key to sucess!
| crashfourit 4/26/05 . chapter 1
I actualy laughed my head off while reading your fic. Quite intersting to see Jenny out classed in fighting. What about the Cluster and Vexus? What about the girl in the capsel? Are you going to pair Jenny with anyone? Please update.
| yingyanggirl 4/26/05 . chapter 1
wow a perfect combo! cute and funny!