 Slayer-Gal-X 2009-10-07 . chapter 5I loved it :)I loved What if Emma Left home? I was intresting to see how Emma's life could have been. :D Write more! |
 MiDushiNoSushi 2009-04-01 . chapter 5Yimmy, this is absolute torture..you've got these amazing story lines.. do you have any more simmering around in your head?? :o) |
 iFoner 2008-07-19 . chapter 5 After reading through these vignettes, I am convinced this is your best work. Ok, so you have some typos which detract from the story's flow but that is such a minor complaint when faced with the scope of these tales. You show an amazing wealth of literary tricks that leaves me in awe. There is so much variety and you do it all so well! Your narrative style, plotting, and descriptions are excellent, but it becomes mind blowing when you combine everything. Amazing. |
 ravenaurelius 2008-01-21 . chapter 5cool story |
 Knight Wulf 2007-07-15 . chapter 5loved what you have so far please update. |
 pdli 2007-04-09 . chapter 5 That one line about Emma liking Scott, but liking Maddie more just totally made my day. Thank you
I mean the whole story was awesome beyond belief, but I just couldnt help laugh at that part. |
 Spikesagitta 2007-01-28 . chapter 5another very emotional chapter, still manage to brought tears to my eyes as i read about their hurts and the sadness they have to endure and suffer while protecting each other. i cant wait for the next one! heck, every chapter seem to be getting longer and longer, the next one must be the great wall of china chapter in this story! |
 Spikesagitta 2007-01-28 . chapter 4oh this is very good! at the last part, i thought it was emma holding shawn upside down, kinda shocked to learn that it was jean, through gotta admit, that kinda cool |
 Spikesagitta 2007-01-28 . chapter 3interesting...the world might just be a better place if some idiot with too much time actually took over, i mean world peace! since it's all under one rule, and the say idiot cant do mischief since he/her have to run the world. emma frost? well, that as good as any i figure, at least she's onli ruthless when people don follow her^^ |
 Spikesagitta 2007-01-28 . chapter 2ah. slightly less sadder than the previous chapter...through i find that last part with charles xavier amusing^^ |
 Spikesagitta 2007-01-28 . chapter 1i actually cried while reading this, i both love and hate this fic. i love it for it's bautiful told story and love all around. hate it for the sadness and the real message anyone should know |
 keilanch 2006-11-04 . chapter 5another great emma story and i just have to say that the wait was all worth it...you just have the great ability to keep your readers tuning in and reading this fic is like eating pringles, "Once you pop, you can't Stop!"
i certainly can't seem to stop, but i guess i'll have to endure a long wait for what's coming up...oh well...
i'll be here! |
 PinaPoe 2006-10-25 . chapter 5as always i start these stories and am drawn into them, this being no exception. I like the family dynamic you set up. |
 Metroidvania 2006-10-25 . chapter 5Very interesting...
I _really_ like this one. Not sure about more than Ruling the World, but it's _good_. The potential at the end has me absolutely intrigued.
I like this Emma, a mixture of all that stubbornness applied in a different direction, yet more sensitive and protective of Rogue, whom in which I found the differences and similarities to normal canon to be quite the feat.
I found myself guessing on just how this was going to turn out, and I'm intrigued by the results...maybe an addition to this, akin to The Christmas edition with Emma and Jean in the original X-Men?
I'm happy to see you writing again, and hope for more soon.
Later,
MV |
 Hoshi Tamamushiirono 2006-10-25 . chapter 5I think that this one was my favorite so far... |