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Slayer-Gal-X
2009-10-07 . chapter 5
I loved it :)I loved What if Emma Left home? I was intresting to see how Emma's life could have been. :D Write more!
MiDushiNoSushi
2009-04-01 . chapter 5
Yimmy, this is absolute torture..you've got these amazing story lines.. do you have any more simmering around in your head?? :o)
iFoner
2008-07-19 . chapter 5
After reading through these vignettes, I am convinced this is your best work. Ok, so you have some typos which detract from the story's flow but that is such a minor complaint when faced with the scope of these tales. You show an amazing wealth of literary tricks that leaves me in awe. There is so much variety and you do it all so well! Your narrative style, plotting, and descriptions are excellent, but it becomes mind blowing when you combine everything. Amazing.
ravenaurelius
2008-01-21 . chapter 5
cool story
Knight Wulf
2007-07-15 . chapter 5
loved what you have so far please update.
pdli
2007-04-09 . chapter 5
That one line about Emma liking Scott, but liking Maddie more just totally made my day. Thank you

I mean the whole story was awesome beyond belief, but I just couldnt help laugh at that part.
Spikesagitta
2007-01-28 . chapter 5
another very emotional chapter, still manage to brought tears to my eyes as i read about their hurts and the sadness they have to endure and suffer while protecting each other. i cant wait for the next one! heck, every chapter seem to be getting longer and longer, the next one must be the great wall of china chapter in this story!
Spikesagitta
2007-01-28 . chapter 4
oh this is very good! at the last part, i thought it was emma holding shawn upside down, kinda shocked to learn that it was jean, through gotta admit, that kinda cool
Spikesagitta
2007-01-28 . chapter 3
interesting...the world might just be a better place if some idiot with too much time actually took over, i mean world peace! since it's all under one rule, and the say idiot cant do mischief since he/her have to run the world. emma frost? well, that as good as any i figure, at least she's onli ruthless when people don follow her^^
Spikesagitta
2007-01-28 . chapter 2
ah. slightly less sadder than the previous chapter...through i find that last part with charles xavier amusing^^
Spikesagitta
2007-01-28 . chapter 1
i actually cried while reading this, i both love and hate this fic. i love it for it's bautiful told story and love all around. hate it for the sadness and the real message anyone should know
keilanch
2006-11-04 . chapter 5
another great emma story and i just have to say that the wait was all worth it...you just have the great ability to keep your readers tuning in and reading this fic is like eating pringles, "Once you pop, you can't Stop!"

i certainly can't seem to stop, but i guess i'll have to endure a long wait for what's coming up...oh well...

i'll be here!
PinaPoe
2006-10-25 . chapter 5
as always i start these stories and am drawn into them, this being no exception. I like the family dynamic you set up.
Metroidvania
2006-10-25 . chapter 5
Very interesting...

I _really_ like this one. Not sure about more than Ruling the World, but it's _good_. The potential at the end has me absolutely intrigued.

I like this Emma, a mixture of all that stubbornness applied in a different direction, yet more sensitive and protective of Rogue, whom in which I found the differences and similarities to normal canon to be quite the feat.

I found myself guessing on just how this was going to turn out, and I'm intrigued by the results...maybe an addition to this, akin to The Christmas edition with Emma and Jean in the original X-Men?

I'm happy to see you writing again, and hope for more soon.

Later,
MV
Hoshi Tamamushiirono
2006-10-25 . chapter 5
I think that this one was my favorite so far...
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