Ahh I loved that, hmm now i bet you weren't expecting me to review on this? Well here we go contrairy to popular belief i do actually watch Beyblade!
Loved Fallen Phoenix and Pink is the Colour of Love! They both Rocked, and this one was so sweet! Go Rei and Mariah, favourite characters!

you're a really accomplished writter! These show a depth in your writting and that it's got some planning to it. keep going! ^_^ Atleast i'll be reading it!

I think you do the Kai ones much better...

Aww.. that was so cute! I usually dont read ReixMariah, but I made an Exception, and I'm glad I did. Too Kawaii!

I hope you write more poems soon, its nice to read Angsty stuff. Makes me feel fuzzy inside.

*Glomps* XD

-Kinaua

great lol

great lol

great lol

great lol

heehee...sourpuss...

My bet is on:

kai, kai, kai, kai, kai, kai,
kai, kai, kai, kai, kai, kai, kai,

U get it?

Um, this is so sweet, beautiful I mean.

cats rule

That is nice! ^_^

Rei is so sweet...and he is MINE.

heehee

Kai! You are mean to him...poor birdy Kai...

They seem like eight or somethin in this, 'cause the way Mariah acts.

At first I thought they were like, twenty and she had a baby, and he was a drugatic...

sorry...

cats rule

O...

This is so bootiful

Will you make one 'bout Rei if I let u use my character Paradise?

U can use her, and as u asked, she is a beyblade person I made from listening to the song ' Paradise ' by Nelly...

Well um, as always

cats rule

AYIE!

Gracias! ( Is it spelled right?)

See! I can speak in diff languages too!

T .his rocks!

Thanx for reviewing, cause very seldom did...

I'll tell ya somethin though, I'm only eleven...

I shall read all of them now!

Gatos rule! ( spelled right? )

im reviewing like you asked! the POV... i agree with tyson... its gotta be kai, im mean, who else would feel that way? right?

Asan walks in and i stare at him: he he he... one of my characters... asan! go home!

Asan: ne? you do realize my home is 7 billion lights-years away, right?
me:... shut up guardian!.. i look forward to the
one! Jah ne! BTW, im adding you to my fav. authors list!

Wow, nice musings (is that right?) They're cool! Keep writing! And you sent in an OC for one of my stories too! Well that story got taken donw so I wrote it on my other accound on fanart central go to my bio and you'll see a link to it and I'll be using your OC thank you for letting me borrow them.

Is it Kai's or Tala's?