  A hunt 10/25/09 . chapter 4 Please please update this! Excellent so far, you don't need to worry about any it being bad - it's great! Please keep going - or do a sequel! :) |
| 1234 4/12/09 . chapter 1 nice work! Hope you will carry on writing. |
| ninki 5/16/06 . chapter 4 I love it but keep checking for updates and nothing for the last 6 months. :-( more chapters please. You do such a god job at writing it |
 Billy Rose 12/8/05 . chapter 4NO!
nonononononono!
please don't let them split up
the lie is just a little thing, they gotta get over it
oh I can't wait to see if they stick together |
| over it 12/8/05 . chapter 4 aww that was sweet and sad, i hope em and shal can sort things out :) i so wanna know whats up with emma, and all these tests
update soon pls :) |
| shakeahand55 11/17/05 . chapter 3 OH yes Emma & Shalimar rock! Are you going to be updating any time soon? |
| Naweoh 11/13/05 . chapter 3 I'm liking it! I'm glad that you updated again, I'm really enjoying this story and I'm looking forward to read more of it )
Keep it up, you know your good at it ;) |
| LilithFox 11/12/05 . chapter 3 Hi... very good reading material. I just find it kind of odd the relationship between Adam and Shalimar, most of the time they're fighting each other. Besides that, I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward for the next chapters. |
| Billy Rose 11/12/05 . chapter 3 oh boy
adam finding out is never a good thing -unless he's cool with it
then its all good :D
anyway great chap
glad Emma finally made a move |
| MobiusVarient 11/12/05 . chapter 3 I was glad to see an update for this story. It was an awesome chapter, and I can't wait to read more and see how this story further develops. |
| over it 11/12/05 . chapter 3 you really dont have to thank me, i should be thanking you for being such a great writer, i love reading your stuff. i know exactly how you feel about writers block (i've got it now, which is why my fics havent been updated in a little while)
this chapter was great, just as they always are. please continue soon :) |
| Magnus The Wolf 9/6/05 . chapter 2 still interesting... |
| MobiusVarient 7/27/05 . chapter 2 Great story so far. I like the way that you're developing the dynamic between Shal and Emma. I can't wait to read more :o) |
| Delauro 7/22/05 . chapter 2 LOVE it! Can't wait for the next part so keep up the great work and update soon please. |
| TrueDarkHero 7/11/05 . chapter 2 This great! seriously! beautiful!
Love the development between the two of them. You stick very well to Emma's character though she is obviously going through hell. Congrats.
Hope to see more real soon!
Fera |
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