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TegwenielWestwind
2008-12-10 . chapter 3
Even after all this time, this is such a fun story to read.
funkmasterjo
2006-01-21 . chapter 3
Haha, you have the wit for it

2005-12-06 . chapter 1
This is one of the best crossfusion stories I've ever read. One I intend to never remove from my list of favorites. Having Ranma in Tenchi's role makes this a story worth reading over and over. Please continue to keep up the good work.
Zero-Vision
2005-09-04 . chapter 3
lol
Cylon One
2005-02-27 . chapter 3
You got to continue this story! You just gotta! I want to see what goes on in the next chapter. Heck! I want to see everything that happens in this story all the way to the end where Ranma will face off against Kagato. Everything in this story was very well done and it's been really fun so far seeing how Ranma handles things in the role of Tenchi. I really liked how you dropped those little hints in scenes of Ranma's original life. If you could give a possible ETA of how long it would take you to finish every remaining chapter and then have them all released at once, I would certainly be willing to wait for however long it would take you to do this. Just an idea I thought I would pass to you. Your choice if you want to do it that way. It just seems like so many months since I first found this story and I have been patiently waiting for it to continue since then. I'm sure you have good reasons for not doing so yet and I don't want to rush you. Rushing ruins a good story in my opinion and for that reason I don't want you to rush. I just hope at least chapter 4 will come out soon. Would you happen to also be planning to make those Tenchi type stories that followed the original Tenchi timeline that this story is based upon? I'm sure that there were some adventures that followed the defeat of Kagato in the Tenchi anime. I think it would be fun to have Ranma in those as well. Well that's all for now and I hope the next update will be soon. Oh yeah, let me just mention the mistakes I think were made in this third chapter. 1.) "On the ground her the Central gem in her headpiece glowed as it responded to its owner's furious emotions." I think a comma is needed next to the word "ground" and the word "her" was not needed the first time it was used. 2.) It flew into her waiting hands, allowing Ayeka once again to full access of her Juraian powers." I don't believe the word "to" was needed in this sentence and while I can't say for certain, I think "Juraian" is spelled with just one "a". 3.) "Ranma turned back towards Sasami to ask about the releasing the bars." To me, the first time the word "the" was used here was not necessary. These are the correctly spelled words that were mispelled in this chapter. 1.) Existence. 2.) Exclamations. 3.)Familiar
dogbertcarroll
2003-09-30 . chapter 3
LOL! This just keeps getting better and better!
dogbertcarroll
2003-09-30 . chapter 2
Are we sure he's not gay?
dogbertcarroll
2003-09-30 . chapter 1
All Tenchi’s got to do is marry Kasumi Ruriko! It’s so
obvious! How can he not see it?!
LOL! I take it you are a Ranma/Kasumi fan as well?
Great chapter.
Josh
2003-09-10 . chapter 3
You might not update often lately, but you release with quality, which is always apperciated.

I had many a laugh here. Very good work.
Bookstick
2003-09-09 . chapter 3
Good chapter! Please keep it up. I think that you are doing a good job with this story, and would like to see more.
Kawaii-e
2003-09-09 . chapter 3
YOU ARE GOOD!

Not only did you keep OOC out of the way. (Ayeka IS perverted) But you put it in a new, and even more funnier way than Ranma 1/2 and Tenchi Muyo! combinied, the last straw would be Excel showing up... Don't do that.. the fic couldn't handle that.
Adyen
2003-09-09 . chapter 3
*snicker* This isn't half bad, but I don't see what's the point of putting the name 'Ranma' in there with only a few little bits of canon Ranma in this Ranma...
Adyen
2003-09-09 . chapter 3
*snicker* This isn't half bad, but I don't see what's the point of putting the name 'Ranma' in there with only a few little bits of canon Ranma in this Ranma...
Sain-Zee Ueng
2003-09-09 . chapter 3
Yay! Hooray! Continue! The Bet will not DIE!!
Sain-Zee Ueng
2003-09-09 . chapter 3
Yay! Hooray! Continue! The Bet will not DIE!!
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