plz plz! update It's a great story!

It is a very good fic, I like it very much.

Please update!

*kills self* You have to continue! *throws self on the ground* Poor HeisukebabylovecutelittleRAWR! I love heem. :3 Damn...**...**...weeyotch...Buu. Update.

D: ...Ew, her fathers a **. Good job so far! Heisuke and Souji are so cute!

...@_@; Confusing...

That was really good! Poor Hei-kun ;_; I really loved it! And I like Shinji and Midori: they're great! Shin-chan is kind of like my sister when she was younger ^^'

Keep up the good work!

Omg! This chapter was so deep, I loved how you let us look back into Heisuke's memories and his description, I agree to, Heisuke is not gay, and never will be. In one of my story's, he seems slightly gay torward Shin, but they are just brotherly in a way. Good job, can't wait for more!

Wow, a non-yaoi fic with Okita as one of the main characters. I love it. e.e Please continue!

Another chapter! ^_^ I like Shinji so far. She seems realistic, unlike many of the others OC in fanfiction. I also like how you showed her family, and her reactions to her father's... actions. It was great, how she cried because she was useless. I hope her mom'll be alright! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

This looks great! ^_^ Continue!

This is a really good fic! It has lots of imagery, I can't wait to hear more.I'll add this story to my favorites k? Seeyaz. ^_~