NICE FANFICS, I LIKE THEM, I GUESS IT IS WHY I STARTED WRITING FANFICS ALSO. THANK YOU VERY MUCH.

Okay, so I'm basically an awful person for not seeing that you updated this sooner! I was going through and cleaning out my email inbox and found that I had missed the alert! I'm so sorry!

Anyways, this new chapter was excellent (as is the fanart to go with it ) and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The part in the beginning between Ariel and Uld created a visual picture that was perfect for the tragic scene. I still want to know whats going to happen to Rick though!

You and I definitely need to talk and catch up soon though. It's been so long!

It's nice to finally have the Sterling's getting together after decades of being separated. Thanks for continuing this great story! Don't give up yet, we need to see what happens to Scott, Ariel and Rick!

Honestly, it is sad that you killed Uld. He's dead, right? The pacing of this chapter was a little off to me. Maybe because I read it right after #17 and that was climactic! But it's cool, this chapter had some intensity too and more deaths *worries*. And WHAT IS Cooper? It had been so long since you updated that having 2 chapters to read came as a surprise. Don't stop now, OK? ^.^

WOW, what a chapter. I loved the reunion with Max, Miriya and Dana and how you wrote Lisa. I just NEED to find out what Grace does about Scott and what is going on with RICK! IS he alive?

You could see you?
Great cap. Good the final scene, a great adds.

Congratulations and I wait more

=) Luck

Sorry about Uld...dang, he seemed like a cool rival for Scott or brother figure for Ariel (Hmm, why do all of Ariel's brothers have to bite it, first Corg and now Uld.)

So they catch Cooper, now we find out she isn't exactly human. So just what is she, another varient of Invid Simulagent, a Haydonite shadow creation, or somehing else far, far darker?

Hey G!! Sorry it's taken me so long to read and review..but the past couple of weeks have been hectic with school/exams.

I was pleasently surprised when the Fanfiction alert popped up saying you had updated and couldnt wait to read it. This was another great chapter. I love how the story is developing and can't wait to see what happens. I hope Rick is okay...

Please update asap. :) And I hope we can catch up soon!!

Great story. Please continue writing!

Awesome!
Nice to see you back at it with this great update. I won't go into details, instead I'll just say it's all awesome.

Yay, a new chapter to the ongoing story! It is good to see things progressing, although I get the feeling that things will be coming to a head in the very near future. Hmm, I do have to wonder who is going to snap when all of it does first, Sterlings, Grants, or Hays-Hunters...and how will Grace fit into the scheme of things? Will Ariel survive, will Scott be able to get free? Will Cooper and Iskander get their just desserts? I sure hope so!

WOW, I had'nt read this story in a long time. Good to find new chapters. When are you going to finish this? *Points out last update date* I want to know what happens next!

It was cool to finally see another chapter of this story out. I am glad to see that the crew of the SDF-3 was finally recovered, even if the ship was lost itself. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what is going to happen in the confrontation between Cooper and Bernard (Sterling). I do have to wonder if it would be even weirder if Grant suddenly showed up at this point, making things even more complicated...

*reads and reads and reads*

Yeep.

Nasty nasty nasty situation, all around.

Good plot :)

Time for Scott to put it on the line to rescue his girlfriend from the mad doctor, I'd think :)

This is an awesome story! I love the story line! I'm a huge Rick and Lisa fan so I'm hoping Rick comes out of his comma soon and he and Lisa can be reunited. Keep up the good work and update soon, okay?