Reviews for Shiki Four Seasons

Reviews For: Shiki Four Seasons

WildBlackWolf and Viva 2006-11-13 ch 4,	abuseHmm... I disagree with the above reviews, as I think Savyna and Gibari are perfectly written. After the adventure, I can definatly see Savyna becoming less agressive and opening up. I like how she doesn't really initiate anything other than leaning into him, emotions are still new territory for her. Dammit, when I first read this I didn't really like Gibari/Savyna. Now I want to write one. I never noticed how they are really a good couple. @_@ is working on writing a Gibari/Savyna oneshot
Midnight Feathers 2006-01-23 ch 4,	abuseYay! I liked it! Good work! -wingsofheart
Rebbe 2006-01-20 ch 4,	abuseHmm... like I said before, I don't really like the pairing, and Savyna seems a bit OOC... yet it's well written. And that's all that important, right? Anyways, good job!
Pyrestrike 2006-01-19 ch 4,	abuseAwesome job Lugia ^_^ I still say that you have this awesome way of making the day-to-day something special. By that, I mean couples get in fights from time to time, some more often than not. The ones who truly love each other work through them, and grow from it just like how friendship grows. But as often as that happens, seeing Savyna and Gibari make up is something beautiful. I think what makes the whole series nice is because it puts Savyna in a place that we don't get to see, but know is there... We know that she's got to have a spot in her heart for kids, and you touched on that. Great job on the whole series ^_^
TFRiD Queen 2006-01-19 ch 4,	abuseclaps wildly WOO HOO!! Too bad there aren't more fics like this!
Rebbe 2005-12-28 ch 3,	abuseEven though I don't like the pairing, I think that this is really sweet. Good job!
Pyrestrike 2005-08-16 ch 3,	abuseAnother great chapter! It's nice to see the moods change with the seasons... a very classy touch. My only gripe is that... does Autumn so frequently have to be nostalgic and wistful? Bah, probably just me... But I do like the subtle image comparison, with the brown and red and yellow colors of autumn with the same colors in the sands of a desert. Awesome job!
Ice Seraphim 2005-07-27 ch 3,	abuseAww, how cute ^.^ Good chapter!
TFRiD Queen 2005-07-26 ch 3,	abuseYeah, it's me, your serve--I mean, beta. ^^; Short, yes, but I think it does work pretty nicely. Maybe it would've been interesting to add some more stuff in about Azdar, maybe? Like, I dunno, Savyna ponders on her feelings for him? But of course, Gibari/Savyna all the way!
TFRiD Queen 2005-06-20 ch 2,	abuseCutlery...yeah, definately possible. My favorite was the steak knife thou. XD
Ice Seraphim 2005-06-17 ch 2,	abuseYay, you updated! Hee hee, I could picture Savyna throwing cutlery at someone if she was ticked off. Great chapter!
TFRiD Queen 2005-04-27 ch 1,	abuseX3 So waffy at parts...but I think it's fine. I mean, being kinda mushy is new territory for Savyna, so it'd only be natural that she wouldn't be able to react immediately.
Ice Seraphim 2005-04-27 ch 1,	abuseGreat start. I think Savyna and Gibari are a perfect couple!
writerauthorguy 2005-04-27 ch 1,	abuseAmen, Amen, I say to you! You have ansered my prayers for SayvnaGibari fic. Iwould write one myself, but I can't figure out how to post.
Pyrestrike 2005-04-26 ch 1,	abuseVery, very job well done ^_^ What I like most about it is that you take the liberty to write Savyna how you would think she would be; ooc or not, I like her character all the more. And tender moments always melt me :P Gibari is perfectly done, I think, because he obviously has that playful-tough-guy streak in him, and a compassion that far exceeds Kalas'. If there's one thing you'd like to add (and I totally become a hypocrite as I say this, considering my stance on descriptions) I would suggest adding some colorful weather to further enhance the tone and mood. And so I sign off before I start to sound like an English teacher. ~Ra'bin

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