 ThebigW 2005-05-28 . chapter 4And so it ends. The Cynic says so. No amount of begging or cajoling will budge the Cynical one an iota, or a hairs-breadth, whichever is smaller.
As it should be.
Oh, and I know exactly what and where the ulnar artery is... just having a bit of fun, similar in "vein" to the sense of humor of the protagonist of your work of fiction.
So we'll just have to wait until the mood strikes you for your next offering. Always a treat.
Regards.
W. |
 Silk Hope 2005-05-25 . chapter 4Lol, I never been called nice before.
The cliffhanger, I think, was a good place to stop; it leaves people thinking to fill in the rest. So you don't have to please anyone.
Okay now that I said that...You can ignore me now. Heh
S.H. |
 MeatwaD9021 2005-05-24 . chapter 4Very good and interesting story so far. I hope you update it soon. I am curious to find out what happens next. Good job. |
 ThebigW 2005-05-21 . chapter 3The ulnar artery? Not the...
Ahem. Yes, yes. Just having a bit of fun.
He has developed a soft spot for her has he not? I thought at first it was a master/pet relationship, but there is more to it than that.
This is so sensuous, you've made them almost lovers, in a manner of speaking.
Wonderful.
Regards.
W. |
 ladyraylen 2005-05-17 . chapter 3 hm... maybe you should do more... o.O I know that was suppose to be the end, but this is one that had me on the edge of my set!!
i like your version of alucard, very old and inhuman. ;-) |
 NalaravatheRed 2005-05-17 . chapter 3my glee? well I am very happy for the update, though sad that there will be no more. You kind of left us on a cliff hanger there ^_^. However, twas a good story. I look forward to hearing more from you in the future. |
 ThebigW 2005-05-14 . chapter 2It's almost as if you are a symbiote living inside Alucard's head; those thoughts which are his, which are yours, are so spot on, imo. The suspense is in that Seras will inevitably have to face him, knowing that he knows what she knows, and also knowing that some price must be paid.
But Alucard is full of surprises, ne? Let's see what (else) he has up his sleeve...
Regards.
W. |
 I 2005-05-11 . chapter 2 i just want to state that i like this "fic" alot
its
Unique
Point
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wiew
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refreshing :) |
 NalaravatheRed 2005-05-11 . chapter 2this is great. please continue. |
 Silk Hope 2005-05-11 . chapter 2Oh Interesting. I didn't think you would write another chapter, well maybe. Anyway; this is good I could picture it in my mind, like a real 'show?' I guess you could put it that way.
I have no idea where your going with this fic, I guess thats the point, huh? Keep your readers guessing? But I won't guess, I'll just wait. |
 ThebigW 2005-05-07 . chapter 1"Well now, police girl, you simply can't extinguish that nasty human trait even after all this time and all my personal attention? Curiosity killed the cat, but you are already dead. So what shall I do with you now?"
"M... Master..."
Sorry, but that's what I heard in my head after reading this.
Another great opening salvo from the Cynic.
Regards.
W. |
 Silk Hope 2005-05-04 . chapter 1Well interesting... but good nonetheless. |
 Hitokiri Cumberdale 2005-05-02 . chapter 1HaHa, Seras is in deep ** if alucard hasn't realized she's ther eyet. OR he wil just be amused, you can never really tell what's going on in that mind of his can you?
that's what makes the diary fun to read
hehehe
*smirks*
being sneeky is fun
O_o;;
Sorry bloke, but i'm up at like, 3 in the morning and can't fall asleep so i'm... kind ain a weird mood
^_^
Can't wait for the next chap
BYE!
*runs off to take a sleeping pill*
we... |
 NalaravatheRed 2005-04-27 . chapter 1*eyes glow* you WILL update. Good stories should not be left unfinished. *eyes cease to glow* just do it, yeah? |