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Reviews For: One Last Goodbye
carloslovesme 2008-03-17 . chapter 1
goodstory,eventhoughcarlosismyfavorite
Anon 2005-09-04 . chapter 1
SAD! :(
really good though
HoneyX5-452 2005-05-13 . chapter 1
you are right, it is very sad! it's a shame that she dumped him...
about the rating, perhaps you should raise it to M because of suicide...
Ayeesha 2005-05-12 . chapter 1
Oh no that was so sad. I can't beleiev John died. You really captured the emotion well and it was a great fic although upsetting as well
newsgal-07 2005-05-09 . chapter 1
That's so sad!
You know, that is a possibility. Especially if the baby turns out to be Carlos's and not his.
tan-mx 2005-05-05 . chapter 1
U FREAK! HOW CAN U MAKE JOHN DIE??!! anyway it was excellent! emotions were descibed to perfection, thoughts sorted carefully... you go, gal!
NOOOOOO!!!! 2005-04-29 . chapter 1
Ah...so sad... *BooHoo* i hate sad endings! Anyway, good story... but... how did he get on top of the roof?
JohnXGabby4eva 2005-04-28 . chapter 1
Wah! I can't believe that John died! He's actually one of my favourite character. Oh, it's so sad. It really reminds of Avril Lavigne's sad number 'Slipped Away'. Anyway, please do keep writing Gabby/John fanfic. I really love your story.
Red and blue 2005-04-27 . chapter 1
What the hell? Why did you make him die! Anyway, good story. Almost got me cryin' there!! Good story, very good.
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