 carloslovesme 2008-03-17 . chapter 1 goodstory,eventhoughcarlosismyfavorite |
 Anon 2005-09-04 . chapter 1 SAD! :(
really good though |
 HoneyX5-452 2005-05-13 . chapter 1you are right, it is very sad! it's a shame that she dumped him...
about the rating, perhaps you should raise it to M because of suicide... |
 Ayeesha 2005-05-12 . chapter 1Oh no that was so sad. I can't beleiev John died. You really captured the emotion well and it was a great fic although upsetting as well |
 newsgal-07 2005-05-09 . chapter 1That's so sad!
You know, that is a possibility. Especially if the baby turns out to be Carlos's and not his. |
 tan-mx 2005-05-05 . chapter 1U FREAK! HOW CAN U MAKE JOHN DIE??!! anyway it was excellent! emotions were descibed to perfection, thoughts sorted carefully... you go, gal! |
 NOOOOOO!!!! 2005-04-29 . chapter 1 Ah...so sad... *BooHoo* i hate sad endings! Anyway, good story... but... how did he get on top of the roof? |
 JohnXGabby4eva 2005-04-28 . chapter 1 Wah! I can't believe that John died! He's actually one of my favourite character. Oh, it's so sad. It really reminds of Avril Lavigne's sad number 'Slipped Away'. Anyway, please do keep writing Gabby/John fanfic. I really love your story. |
 Red and blue 2005-04-27 . chapter 1 What the hell? Why did you make him die! Anyway, good story. Almost got me cryin' there!! Good story, very good. |