I like the different twist/take

poor cameron, i feel sorry for her good story

Great story! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens on their dinner. Keep up the awesome work.

yay!

continue PLEASE?! :D

**LOVE** ah omg you have to continue. i love you!!

heh i am now your personal stalker!
you captured their character PERFECTLY. i just hate it when ppl kill the character! SEXCELLENT JOB!
:D

I liked this third chapter the best of all. The dialogue was very good and realistic. I look forward to seeing what you write next!

good chapie...me likie! Hughsday...yes it is Hughsday for us obsessed folk isn't it. Glad you didn't go overly sentimental with this scene...great job if keeping it in character as well. Until next you post!

This part's not really that unrealistic. Well, maybe it is, but then you've written it so well in character with that dialogue that it doesn't seem at all out of place. Well done!

I believe the words MORE come to mind! LOL take your time, but I do hope to see more!

Ooh. Your Aftermath beats mine. I like it. Please update...

Let's see where this goes shall we?