This chapter was really good too, and again I think you captured the character of Vegeta well. ^^ Nice story, it was interesting and kept me entertained. ^^'

Mm... I really, really liked this one. I think that in this chapter you captured the character of Goku well, and not to mntion your grammar and spelling is excellent. I guess you could say I'm tired of reading stories where there's always horrible grammar and such, so it's noce to come across a story every now and then that's actually written and made well. ^^

Holy! I've never read a story like this before and I've been reading fanfiction for eternity! I absolutely loved the unique interpretation of what really happened during fusion. I also strongly agree about Goku's lack of dispassion. The man couldn't even bring himself to cry if he wanted to. Of course I wish a line or two was added about what they found out about Vegeta as well. Anyway, fabulous job! Keep writing.

WOW! O_O That was really really really good! :D
The descriptions from both Veggie and Goku's pov's of what it was like were so entertaining and well-written. I thought the bit about Goku being dispassionate was interesting.
Aw, Veggie's last line was a little depressing.
Great fic! I'm adding it to my favorites!

Sheesh... this is really, I dunno, kinda depressing compared t the "Kyuubi wore Tennis" that you wrote at the exact same time. What were you on, vodka? j/k I liked the part where he was "drowning" - that is so cool. Could he breath (let me guess, you're probably screamng yes at the omputer screen right now, right?)? But it was kinda mushy, I think, with those two leaning on eahc other and playing janken, must be that "level thre" stuyff, huh?
Gah, I'm in a rush - I'm reading during my computer class wheh I'm not suposed to and so it's why my typing looks abd. Bai!