Oh **, that was funny.

Very very cute! It made me giggle IRL :) Keep up the writing!

O.O ...Yup. I completely agree with your author note...
^laughs hysterically^

Um... that was... random...

Personally, I don't see the two of them together, since their crews' differing philosophies and their personalities don't fit together. Flares play fair, Eyes pull every nasty trick it takes to win. Phyrra is passionate (in my opinion), while Moordryd loves himself too much to bother with a girl (the Eyes' compound is... er... subtle proof to his narcicism). If this happened, then I'm guessing this is more of a one-night stand.

Other than that, it's a pretty amusing ending. Heh, I can immagine him screaming, "WHY DON'T YOU JUST MARRY MY FREAKING FATHER THEN?!" Poor Phyrra :P

PS: I just noticed you wrote the closet fic as well. Lol.

LOL!! This has to be the funniest dragon booster fanfiction I have ever saw! haha nice job! ^^

So blissfully wrong...and yet, a part of me says it's completely in Phyrra's character O.o XD

One or two typos, and I'm positive it's spelt "Pyrrah". Watch the punctuation, capitalisation within dialogue tags, and then/than confusion in the second sentence; the sloppy grammar really took away from the story. But I love the comparison to Word--hilarious punchline!--and I thought it was very much IC for both Moordryd and Pyrrah.