Love it. UPdate soon.

I love this story. Please upate soon!

Great start can't wait to see more

hey, i really like this so far. its a great start with a lot of detail which i like. i'm interested to see where you go with this fic so i hope you continue it soon. great job!

Kim

I like reading new fics, this was good, but you don't necessarily need to put how much the characters weigh, cuz really, it's not that important. Don't take this offensively, though. Great start, you should continue it!