Oh! Well done, it was all so happy (I admit, i was thinking 'oh great, another Syd/Vaughn (ok, you never said it was Vaughn, but i'm assuming) story where everything is perfect') and then WHAM, 'oh, * she's dead'. Ohh!

it fine, it was short thought, and not much happended, so i'll review more when you update with a beefier chapter :)